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New Beginnings - a Shadorma

Dawn  shall  break 
                                 Flowers  shall  soon sprout 
                                             Tomorrow
                                         Shall  bring  me
                        New   dreams ,  lasting  thrills  and   love 
                                 With   hope   filled   success 




January 7, 2015
contest: New beginnings - a shadorma
sponsor: Kim Merryman
syllables checked on www.how many syllables.com

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/16/2016 10:13:00 PM White Sage, congrats on your awesome win. Love LINDA :-) Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/17/2016 5:17:00 AM thanks so much Linda, i appreciate your comment

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/13/2016 8:01:00 PM This is shining with hope and imagery. Congrats on your win, white sage. Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/13/2016 8:07:00 PM thanks so much Andrea

Skat A Date: 1/12/2016 11:20:00 PM White Sage, Congrats on your New Beginnings win. LUV~ SKAT Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/13/2016 8:25:00 AM thanks Skat, am glad you came by...i really do appreciate that

Paul Callus Date: 1/11/2016 3:50:00 PM You look to the future with hope and faith, WS. Your positive attitude has lead this poem to a fine win...congratulations! // paul Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/11/2016 4:04:00 PM thanks Paul

Eve Roper Date: 1/11/2016 2:52:00 PM White, I love the wisdom! Congrats on your win! Eve Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/11/2016 3:43:00 PM thanks Eve

Kim Merryman Date: 1/11/2016 2:02:00 PM Each day is a new beginning! White Sage, congrats on your placement and thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/11/2016 3:39:00 PM thanks Kim

Paul Callus Date: 1/10/2016 2:39:00 PM You look at the future with hope and faith, WS; that in itself is already a winning attitude! ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/10/2016 3:34:00 PM thanks Paul, am glad you came by

Dalia Shahein Date: 1/7/2016 4:03:00 PM This is just a pretty and nice poem my friend , best of luck in the contest...hugs / / :) dalia Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/7/2016 5:39:00 PM thanks so much dalia, I appreciate that dear

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/7/2016 3:10:00 PM I LIKE THIS. It's very positive and pretty. Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/7/2016 3:26:00 PM thanks Andrea

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/7/2016 11:34:00 AM Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..New beginings should offer hope..Sara Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/7/2016 3:27:00 PM yeah, it offers the strongest pillar for hope, I appreciate your comment

Robyn Campbell Date: 1/7/2016 8:50:00 AM Fantastic Shadorma. I hope you win. Love it. Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/7/2016 2:53:00 PM thanks Robyn, am glad you like it, I appreciate that

John Beam Date: 1/7/2016 8:30:00 AM Great flow and I like the form. It is sort of a European dodoitsu. Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/7/2016 2:49:00 PM thanks John, it's a shadorma, wrote it for the contest...though dodoitsu somehow takes the colour of it too

Legendary Legend Date: 1/7/2016 7:16:00 AM legendary as udual Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/7/2016 8:03:00 AM thanks for coming by...not legendary though loo White Sage Date: 1/7/2016 8:03:00 AM thanks for coming by...not legendary though loo White Sage Date: 1/7/2016 8:02:00 AM thanks for coming by...not legendary though loo

Michael Whatley Date: 1/7/2016 6:56:00 AM Great use of words White! Short, and yet vivid. Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/7/2016 7:53:00 AM thanks Michael White Sage Date: 1/7/2016 7:52:00 AM thanks Michael

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/7/2016 5:57:00 AM Excellent and when I say excellent I mean...a seven. Wisdom is to keep the meaning of words and actions in harmonious coexistence with our thoughts! Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/7/2016 6:23:00 AM thanks Demetrios White Sage Date: 1/7/2016 6:21:00 AM thanks Demetrios