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New Beginnings - a Shadorma

Dawn shall break Flowers shall soon sprout Tomorrow Shall bring me New dreams , lasting thrills and love With hope filled success January 7, 2015 contest: New beginnings - a shadorma sponsor: Kim Merryman syllables checked on www.how many syllables.com

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/16/2016 10:13:00 PM

White Sage, congrats on your awesome win. Love LINDA :-)

White Sage
Date: 1/17/2016 5:17:00 AM

thanks so much Linda, i appreciate your comment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2016 8:01:00 PM

This is shining with hope and imagery. Congrats on your win, white sage.

White Sage
Date: 1/13/2016 8:07:00 PM

thanks so much Andrea

Skat A

Date: 1/12/2016 11:20:00 PM

White Sage, Congrats on your New Beginnings win. LUV~ SKAT

White Sage
Date: 1/13/2016 8:25:00 AM

thanks Skat, am glad you came by...i really do appreciate that

Paul Callus

Date: 1/11/2016 3:50:00 PM

You look to the future with hope and faith, WS. Your positive attitude has lead this poem to a fine win...congratulations! // paul

White Sage
Date: 1/11/2016 4:04:00 PM

thanks Paul

Eve Roper

Date: 1/11/2016 2:52:00 PM

White, I love the wisdom! Congrats on your win! Eve

White Sage
Date: 1/11/2016 3:43:00 PM

thanks Eve

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/11/2016 2:02:00 PM

Each day is a new beginning! White Sage, congrats on your placement and thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim

White Sage
Date: 1/11/2016 3:39:00 PM

thanks Kim

Paul Callus

Date: 1/10/2016 2:39:00 PM

You look at the future with hope and faith, WS; that in itself is already a winning attitude! ~ Regards // paul

White Sage
Date: 1/10/2016 3:34:00 PM

thanks Paul, am glad you came by

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/7/2016 4:03:00 PM

This is just a pretty and nice poem my friend , best of luck in the contest...hugs / / :) dalia

White Sage
Date: 1/7/2016 5:39:00 PM

thanks so much dalia, I appreciate that dear

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2016 3:10:00 PM

I LIKE THIS. It's very positive and pretty.

White Sage
Date: 1/7/2016 3:26:00 PM

thanks Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2016 11:34:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..New beginings should offer hope..Sara

White Sage
Date: 1/7/2016 3:27:00 PM

yeah, it offers the strongest pillar for hope, I appreciate your comment

Robyn Campbell

Date: 1/7/2016 8:50:00 AM

Fantastic Shadorma. I hope you win. Love it.

White Sage
Date: 1/7/2016 2:53:00 PM

thanks Robyn, am glad you like it, I appreciate that

John Beam

Date: 1/7/2016 8:30:00 AM

Great flow and I like the form. It is sort of a European dodoitsu.

White Sage
Date: 1/7/2016 2:49:00 PM

thanks John, it's a shadorma, wrote it for the contest...though dodoitsu somehow takes the colour of it too

Legendary Legend

Date: 1/7/2016 7:16:00 AM

legendary as udual

White Sage
Date: 1/7/2016 8:03:00 AM

thanks for coming by...not legendary though loo

White Sage
Date: 1/7/2016 8:03:00 AM

thanks for coming by...not legendary though loo

White Sage
Date: 1/7/2016 8:02:00 AM

thanks for coming by...not legendary though loo

Michael Whatley

Date: 1/7/2016 6:56:00 AM

Great use of words White! Short, and yet vivid.

White Sage
Date: 1/7/2016 7:53:00 AM

thanks Michael

White Sage
Date: 1/7/2016 7:52:00 AM

thanks Michael

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/7/2016 5:57:00 AM

Excellent and when I say excellent I mean...a seven. Wisdom is to keep the meaning of words and actions in harmonious coexistence with our thoughts!

White Sage
Date: 1/7/2016 6:23:00 AM

thanks Demetrios

White Sage
Date: 1/7/2016 6:21:00 AM

thanks Demetrios