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New Beginnings- a Shadorma

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Drizzled love I'll change to deluge to sweep you high above where you begin to revive, buoyant in my love. Date: January 4, 2015 Contest: New Beginnings- A Shadorma Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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White Sage

Date: 1/11/2016 4:12:00 PM

congratulations on your placement in the contest Eileen

White Sage
Date: 1/12/2016 1:50:00 PM

you need not worry about that, just get well soon...my best wishes...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/12/2016 1:20:00 PM

Thanks WS. Forgive me for not being able to visit at the moment. I'm unwell and on painkillers. Hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 1/11/2016 3:12:00 PM

The promise of unforgettable heights of love has been rewarded with a lovely and merited win, Eileen. Pleased to see you standing next to me on the winners' podium:) Congratulations!! hugs // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 1/11/2016 2:31:00 PM

Eileen, I love the beautiful imagery you used and the picture wonderful ! Congrats on your win! Love, Eve

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/11/2016 1:35:00 PM

Eileen, your romantic nature shines through in this shadorma. You manage to express so much in so few words. Congrats on your placement and thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2016 3:43:00 PM

wow, I LOVE IT. I did not see it because you put it as verse instead of Shadorma and I was checking the forms column!! I like it even better than the other one. Oh, i hope I can do a good one!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/4/2016 7:17:00 AM

I'm not sure what a Shadorama is but I like the result. Way to go YRH!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/4/2016 9:27:00 AM

Your Royal Highness, eh? I'm so so please with this lovely title, Rick. Bless you. Hugs

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/4/2016 4:14:00 AM

Loved the first 2 lines... Lovely write that sizzles though the page is drizzled :-). PS. Hope you're feeling better, Eileen. Keep well! Claiming complete recovery for you! Blessings and hugs!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/4/2016 2:36:00 AM

Fantastic! That is a New Beginning, dearest Eileen! A seven.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/4/2016 2:39:00 AM

Thank you, my esteemed poet. I hope it is what the sponsor is looking for. Blessings to you...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/4/2016 2:39:00 AM

Enai tres meres pou emai arosti...Varithika. Ponao....:( Efkharisto....gia ola. :)