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Nevermore! I spread my arms to stop you; My feet to kick; My head raised to defy you; My mouth to spit; My tongue stuck out to mock you; My eyes to pierce; Next time I take a deep breath... You have ceased to exist. I finally erased you. *** December 9, 2016. 1st place in contest: Quote Prompt II Sponsor Laura Loo

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/18/2016 3:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win and on the breath. Many wishes, Kai

Darren White
Date: 12/18/2016 3:19:00 AM

Thanks :) That breath, if only!

Afzal Nusker

Date: 12/17/2016 11:46:00 PM

Your deep breath must be quite powerful. I love your format and amazing way of expression. Congrats, Darren.

Darren White
Date: 12/17/2016 11:59:00 PM

Hahaha, yeah, quite powerful :) Thanks!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/17/2016 3:22:00 PM

A powerful piece. Congrats on your win.

Darren White
Date: 12/17/2016 11:42:00 PM

Thank you, I am very happy with it.

Janis Thompson

Date: 12/17/2016 1:59:00 PM

Glad it was a winner. Should have been. Congratulations.

Darren White
Date: 12/17/2016 2:09:00 PM

Janis, THANK you :)

Anu Nayak

Date: 12/17/2016 12:53:00 PM

Dear Darren, awesome:) Congrats on your win!!It is best to erase the one who cheats and let go! love, Anu:)

Darren White
Date: 12/17/2016 12:58:00 PM

Thank you! And I agree :)

Lu Loo

Date: 12/17/2016 12:13:00 PM

So emotive and bold...wonderful poem thank you and congrats :)-luloo

Darren White
Date: 12/17/2016 12:57:00 PM

WoW, I am totally awed and happy! Thank you sooooo much :D

Deborah Burch

Date: 12/13/2016 12:05:00 AM

That emotes finding ones way out!!! Well done my friend!!! Big Hugggs! Deb

Darren White
Date: 12/13/2016 1:13:00 AM

It does, doesn't it :) Thanks Deb!

Janis Thompson

Date: 12/12/2016 2:40:00 PM

Very intense feeling here. Great write. Good luck in the contest.

Darren White
Date: 12/13/2016 1:12:00 AM

Thank you Janis, we'll see what happens :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/11/2016 12:54:00 PM

I really like this, Darren. Very emotive. The judge should love it!

Darren White
Date: 12/11/2016 12:58:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea, I certainly hope so :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/10/2016 10:15:00 AM

Strong powerful words-- like out darn you out of my life. No emotions held back. love phyl

Darren White
Date: 12/10/2016 10:20:00 AM

Exactly, Phyllis, away with.... Thank you :)

Elaine George

Date: 12/10/2016 7:03:00 AM

Powerful words, Darren. Sure to be on the winners list. Also in response to your question re my posting of the first and second chapter of Out of the Darkness. No it has not been published yet. I am still in the process of writing it and will keep you posted as to when I post chapter three. bfn, Elaine

Darren White
Date: 12/10/2016 7:07:00 AM

Thank you, Elaine, I am interested :)