Nevermore

nevermore to say I'm sorry our love embroidered in our hearts in which I will keep so chary everlasting aches of my soul your the other half that makes us whole thereof a zeal always departs giving into sullen sorrow cloaked by shadows if he comes no more fear of the silent bleak morrow we shall get up before the dawn long after the sun and clouds are gone he will return 'nevermore.' 4/2/2018 Contest: Rhyme Time 1 Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Sandra Haight

Date: 4/4/2018 5:47:00 PM

Deep, sad, but beautiful, Eve. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/4/2018 8:55:00 AM

CONGRATS on your win with this sad, moving poem, Eve! Janice

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/3/2018 8:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this heart-felt touching poem. Heartbreaking really.

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/3/2018 8:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this melancholy poem... I like it.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 4/3/2018 6:30:00 PM

Beautiful sad story ...

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/3/2018 1:18:00 PM

Lovely, Eve. Congrats on your win.

Silent One

Date: 4/3/2018 1:00:00 PM

Very deep Eve...

Randy Steele

Date: 4/3/2018 12:54:00 PM

Great poem, Eve. Straight from the heart. Great expression.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/3/2018 10:46:00 AM

such a touching poem Eve, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 4/3/2018 10:29:00 AM

wow crazy metaphors! loved that aspect, great poem sweet Eve! thank you and congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/2/2018 9:40:00 PM

This is so sad, Eve. I see down below where your husband is sick. I am sorry for your distress and sadness. I will add you both in my nightly prayers.

James Peranteau

Date: 4/2/2018 9:21:00 PM

I love this write dear poet...Its message likewise your grammatical effort exudes and enticed me word by word to indulge your write with my excitable cerebral's match....Ty...Have a wonderful Spring...Much love, james

Chris Green

Date: 4/2/2018 5:24:00 PM

Such a sad and touching piece that wraps itself tightly around the heart

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/2/2018 4:52:00 PM

Eve, I was sorry to read below of your husband's illness. This is a very powerful poem and clearly expresses the angst you must be feeling now. I'll keep him in my prayers. Love, Carolyn

Eve Roper
Date: 4/3/2018 9:23:00 PM

Thank you, Carolyn, hugs dear friend