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Nevermore

You stole my soul with trust wed realms of shade As I let my heart lay bare in your eyes And you cherished it like a jewel hand-made I am the fool that believed your breathless word That you loved me I should have known absurd When love turned cold and dark without replies I sought you out at midnight filled with bale To let your blood linger and flood the floor Took your life with the blade of rage and wail I felt no sorrow with the knife I thrust And buried it deep with force and disgust I cried out to your last breath nevermore 3/28/18 contest Rhyme Time 1

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Date: 4/5/2018 5:41:00 PM
Congratulations, Frederick. Dark poem like one of Poe's!!
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Date: 4/4/2018 5:44:00 PM
So deep, dark, and emotional, Frederic. Yet, so beautifully written. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Date: 4/3/2018 8:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Frederic, excellent write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/3/2018 8:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! A different, intriguing poem. I really like it.
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Date: 4/3/2018 12:52:00 PM
Lovely, Frederic. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/3/2018 12:04:00 PM
Congrats, Frederic. Good rhyme. Well deserved win.
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Date: 4/3/2018 10:42:00 AM
Gosh Frederic I'm so used to your gentle romantic sonnets so this deep dark rhyme took me by surprise, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/3/2018 10:27:00 AM
oh here you are again on the winners list dear Frederic! Great metaphors, amazing poem all together sweet poet :) thank you and congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 3/30/2018 10:57:00 PM
Wow! Frederic, such a superb poem. Deep with emotional pain and dark in passionate vengeance with imagery that illuminates your poetic lines brilliantly. A captivating and spectacular write. Best wishes for a win..
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Date: 3/29/2018 2:32:00 PM
That is so dark! Wonderfully crafted poem Frederic, my best to you in the contest! xomo :)
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Date: 3/28/2018 6:00:00 PM
wow Frederic, I really like this. I love the rhyme scheme, is that part of the contest? I guess I need to look at the contest. But it works, and your wording is great.... sad, but so emotive.
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Date: 3/28/2018 3:11:00 PM
To kill love what greater psim than that..
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Date: 3/28/2018 1:50:00 PM
- Awesome poem, Frederic - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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