Neverland

On the south-western side of the old mission school, near the corner of First Street, where blackberries grew a field claimed by youngsters was crosshatched with tracks. It was riddled by gophers and, nettled with fox-tails and the children's bare feet had constructed thin trails, cupping deep paths that were littered with smiles, deep in the amber of tall weeds and dry grass. It wasn't too far from the patched wire fence that hemmed the backyard of my Grandmother's house. Westerly whirlwinds would rattle the ragweed, while seeds of the bull-thorns, that prickled our toes, would spread with the tumbleweeds, now tossed into rows like last winter's snowmen, worn to the bone There were traces of honeysuckle mixed with wild rose from Grandma's old arbor, that loomed in the distance A rusty old weather vane like a merry-go round would spin like a top that might never stop The ivy was overgrown, and a sleepy old hound would snooze by the clothesline, in shade he had found But, deep in the field, was a land of our own A place we called 'Neverland', a loft in this poem In the yoke of one tree, with the help of our dad was a fort built of scrap wood, from piles by the shed. And by hook or by crook, I would take all commands While my brother's brewed brainstorms, and his black plastic hook, assigned him the Captain, while I was the crew of a ramshackle galleon, brought to life from our books While I dangled in air, from a tired old swing "Tinker", my name...in this masculine game.. I would push off, while he pulled me, right up to the sky and into the branches, with leaves in my eyes...... I would fly to the depth's of a steel gray-blue sky I would grovel, and shovel, to have his approval........ for he was much older, much wiser than me I would play like a tomboy,.....shove doll-drums away Such sweet summer days,......while bright splintered rays of hot summer sun, would spotlight our play. We would stay until twilight, to watch the sun die Defying all gravity.......I could see to eternity Tootsie Pops clung to the tip of our tongues while the sun of the twilight, dipped over the dunes and the call of our mother, slipped over the moon
____________________________________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 7/25/2016 7:49:00 AM
Wonderful nostalgic poem, congrats on your win
Login to Reply
Date: 7/22/2016 6:41:00 AM
Wonderful narrative Carrie, congratulations ...
Login to Reply
Date: 7/21/2016 4:08:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on your placement lovely lady :)-luloo
Login to Reply
Date: 7/21/2016 1:56:00 PM
Childhood memories are the best always,congrats Carrie!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/21/2016 1:31:00 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my second Premiere contest. Stop by my latest blog "The Perfect One." Forever **SKAT**
Login to Reply
Date: 7/21/2016 12:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Login to Reply
Date: 7/21/2016 10:59:00 AM
Beautiful...Congrats on your win. :)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/21/2016 10:11:00 AM
Such beautiful write Carrie! I salute you! Congratulations and keep on writing more. You are indeed an inspiration! ;)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/21/2016 8:14:00 AM
wonderful memories Carrie congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 4/18/2015 3:19:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations, in Rob's Golden days contest. Take Care ~LINDA~
Login to Reply
Date: 4/10/2015 4:38:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem, 7, such wonderful words and lines expressing glowing lovely childhood memories
Login to Reply
Date: 4/9/2015 2:42:00 AM
a golden moment worth remembering... sweet congrats on your fine award, carrie!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2015 7:28:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your win. A beautiful write!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2015 7:13:00 PM
What wonderful memories you shared, Carrie, through your very descriptive and beautifully written narrative. I felt as though I was right there while reading it. And how we all used to play then...with so much imagination, so care-free, and staying out in our neighborhoods until mother called...those were the days. Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2015 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful poem and win. Blessings dear friend Eve
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2015 5:44:00 AM
Carrie, you took a golden day and made it so much more. Congrats and thanks for entering.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2015 1:35:00 AM
Wonderful and interesting piece.Good write,Carrie. Congrats on your superb win...kudos to you..
Login to Reply
Date: 2/1/2015 8:46:00 AM
This one grabbed my soul!!!.. Tired old swing.. I LOVED my tire swing.. Faving this nostalgic piece, dear friend.. It takes me to a happy place... Hugs.. Arlene
Login to Reply
Date: 1/31/2015 9:53:00 AM
Carrie , Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 1/27/2015 12:43:00 PM
Beautiful Carrie. this took me back to my childhood days. Carefree days that no longer remain. Xlnt...
Login to Reply
Date: 1/22/2015 8:49:00 PM
Oh how I love this my special friend. I could see and feel the pictures as I read. You have serious talent.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/30/2014 9:47:00 AM
Beautiful images, Carrie! Congratulations on your win!!!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2014 8:20:00 PM
Oh ,Carrie, this is so special. You are truly a great poetess..congrats. BG
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2014 7:12:00 PM
Carrie, a truly beautiful poem...I can hear children's voices calling as if from a distant place. A great write. Congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2014 6:16:00 PM
another beautiful write here from you, carrie, you write nostalgia so well, with delicate poignancy; some nice rhyme woven throughout, and I love those last two lines - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
Login to Reply
12
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter