Neverland

On the south-western side of the old mission school, near the corner of First Street, where blackberries grew a field claimed by youngsters was crosshatched with tracks. It was riddled by gophers and, nettled with fox-tails and the children's bare feet had constructed thin trails, cupping deep paths that were littered with smiles, deep in the amber of tall weeds and dry grass. It wasn't too far from the patched wire fence that hemmed the backyard of my Grandmother's house. Westerly whirlwinds would rattle the ragweed, while seeds of the bull-thorns, that prickled our toes, would spread with the tumbleweeds, now tossed into rows like last winter's snowmen, worn to the bone There were traces of honeysuckle mixed with wild rose from Grandma's old arbor, that loomed in the distance A rusty old weather vane like a merry-go round would spin like a top that might never stop The ivy was overgrown, and a sleepy old hound would snooze by the clothesline, in shade he had found But, deep in the field, was a land of our own A place we called 'Neverland', a loft in this poem In the yoke of one tree, with the help of our dad was a fort built of scrap wood, from piles by the shed. And by hook or by crook, I would take all commands While my brother's brewed brainstorms, and his black plastic hook, assigned him the Captain, while I was the crew of a ramshackle galleon, brought to life from our books While I dangled in air, from a tired old swing "Tinker", my name...in this masculine game.. I would push off, while he pulled me, right up to the sky and into the branches, with leaves in my eyes...... I would fly to the depth's of a steel gray-blue sky I would grovel, and shovel, to have his approval........ for he was much older, much wiser than me I would play like a tomboy,.....shove doll-drums away Such sweet summer days,......while bright splintered rays of hot summer sun, would spotlight our play. We would stay until twilight, to watch the sun die Defying all gravity.......I could see to eternity Tootsie Pops clung to the tip of our tongues while the sun of the twilight, dipped over the dunes and the call of our mother, slipped over the moon
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De Burca Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 7:49 AM
Wonderful nostalgic poem, congrats on your win
Smith Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 6:41 AM
Wonderful narrative Carrie, congratulations ...
Scars Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 4:08 PM
Carrie, congrats on your placement lovely lady :)-luloo
Chansarkar Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 1:56 PM
Childhood memories are the best always,congrats Carrie!
A  Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 1:31 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my second Premiere contest. Stop by my latest blog "The Perfect One." Forever **SKAT**
Devnath  Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 12:21 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 10:59 AM
Beautiful...Congrats on your win. :)
Selfa Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 10:11 AM
Such beautiful write Carrie! I salute you! Congratulations and keep on writing more. You are indeed an inspiration! ;)
Allison Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 8:14 AM
wonderful memories Carrie congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
A   Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Carrie, Congratulations, in Rob's Golden days contest. Take Care ~LINDA~
La France Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 4:38 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem, 7, such wonderful words and lines expressing glowing lovely childhood memories
Onclaud Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 2:42 AM
a golden moment worth remembering... sweet congrats on your fine award, carrie!
Reams Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 7:28 PM
Congrats Carrie on your win. A beautiful write!
Haight Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 7:13 PM
What wonderful memories you shared, Carrie, through your very descriptive and beautifully written narrative. I felt as though I was right there while reading it. And how we all used to play then...with so much imagination, so care-free, and staying out in our neighborhoods until mother called...those were the days. Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 1:26 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful poem and win. Blessings dear friend Eve
Carmack Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 5:44 AM
Carrie, you took a golden day and made it so much more. Congrats and thanks for entering.
Arowolo Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 1:35 AM
Wonderful and interesting piece.Good write,Carrie. Congrats on your superb win...kudos to you..
Smith Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 8:46 AM
This one grabbed my soul!!!.. Tired old swing.. I LOVED my tire swing.. Faving this nostalgic piece, dear friend.. It takes me to a happy place... Hugs.. Arlene
A   Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 9:53 AM
Carrie , Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
Upchurch Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 12:43 PM
Beautiful Carrie. this took me back to my childhood days. Carefree days that no longer remain. Xlnt...
Ginn Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 8:49 PM
Oh how I love this my special friend. I could see and feel the pictures as I read. You have serious talent.
O'Leary Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 9:47 AM
Beautiful images, Carrie! Congratulations on your win!!!
Gorelick Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 8:20 PM
Oh ,Carrie, this is so special. You are truly a great poetess..congrats. BG
Gibson Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 7:12 PM
Carrie, a truly beautiful poem...I can hear children's voices calling as if from a distant place. A great write. Congratulations.
Puddifoot Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 6:16 PM
another beautiful write here from you, carrie, you write nostalgia so well, with delicate poignancy; some nice rhyme woven throughout, and I love those last two lines - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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