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Neverending Quest

The river wanted to love its own motion In my hands in a blond and pink nudity I failed as my strength to hold was poor I bowed down and went to a little brook I looked to my image and it said it's okay Did I cry a little still in the silver raindrops Could I offer red rose vapour to the brook I went to the mirror who so nicely smiled I felt there were further pantoums to read Further mountains to look for and explore I sat before an afternoon, blue absorption, Silence, shadows, twitters in the bushes Music of daybreak and taps on my thought I answered to find sincere quests never end Just then a nightingale sang out in a thrill October 15//2027

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Date: 10/16/2017 2:13:00 PM
Wow, amazing write, Probir, :) a wonderful read... Hugs dear friend ~`*
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/17/2017 5:12:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 10/15/2017 11:17:00 AM
Hmm.., this poem is full of curious insights Probir and deep thoughts that has me thinking of your neverending quest... Always such beautiful use of language and imagery in your lovely lines; your second stanza is especially illuminating.., so brightly it shines! Enjoyed! P.S. Who is the mirror..? :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/17/2017 5:26:00 AM
This delight of yours in reading poems is enviably wonderful ... Though I write mostly in first person, the story is mostly not personal ... This poem is based on an experience of a conversation with a friend ... The mirror as you can well understand may be interpreted from multiple angles ...
Date: 10/15/2017 6:15:00 AM
This feels deep in thought and search, Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/17/2017 5:28:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay ...

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