Never Say Die!

Watching a movie ('Walking Tall')
I spied a cockroach on my wall,
crawling in and out of sight,
the proud homeowner's sorry plight.
Now I see him, now I don't,
a creepy feeling, and I won't
feel better till he's dead and gone,
considering it a job well done.

The kitchen was my battleground,
I chased the bugger round and round,
('persistent' was the name I christened
my thick-skinned antagonist,)
for dodging footfalls he'd survived
the era of the dinosaurs,
avoiding conflict he'd outlived
the perils of unnumbered wars.

Tired and soaked with perspiration,
craving his elimination,
I, with magazine extended
dealt a blow, his life was ended.
Or was it? Wriggling in his death throes,
wiggling several sets of black toes,
on his back he scarce could right
himself to carry on the fight.

Yet more he fiddled, then was still,
an adversary with a will,
he lay quiescent on the rug,
that bold, defiant little bug.
I left him shaken, (his demise 
beyond salvation?), then my eyes
beheld no insect, just a stain,
for he'd crept off to scare again!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Gorelick Avatar
November 26, 2008 at 2:44 PM
Oh, to funny.. my family all got a laugh.
Gass Avatar
November 26, 2008 at 2:12 PM
This is great Keith. The rhyme and rhythm is perfect and very funny. (I'm still laughing!) Happy Thanksgiving. Love Robin.
Thomas Avatar
November 26, 2008 at 12:52 PM
*Shiver**Shudder* I shuddered through this whole poem! Blech! Very well described....lol Gross...errr, I mean....great one! :)
Faulkner Avatar
November 26, 2008 at 11:16 AM
Keith, this a dandy! Vividly told, with great run-on lines, interesting all the way through. Thanks for the treat. Happy Thanksgiving. Brian
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