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Never Make a Promise

NEVER MAKE A PROMISE Never made a promise, a promise can be broke A father says to his son see you later I promise 7 hours into work the father dies from a stroke Funeral held all eyes on the young boy Thomas Head lowered; his hands clenched in total anger Nothing could be said or done; to calm Thomas Who had now lost his one and only true anchor The boy cry's out, but dad you made a promise Indiana Shaw . . . -_-

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Date: 9/7/2019 10:19:00 PM
We sometimes impulsively make promises without thinking this could happen in any way. You are right. Sad when a promise is broken like this. Well penned!
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