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Never Force a Trickle,Wait For the Shower

Back from his five nights summer camp I bombarded my son with questions What did you eat, when did you sleep What was the best part and such He gave me bored couple words- ‘Okay’, ‘not much’, ‘Yeah’ And kept mum at some I felt dejected, ignored and sad But next night, he was abuzz with excitement You know mom, I walked twenty thousand steps per day I sparingly ate my snacks because I didn’t pack enough We, freshmen had to clean the toilets each day We flipped the teachers’ boats when canoeing Can you cook noodles, I’ve missed them so. I absorbed each word, relieved and exultant And silently imbibed the priceless lesson I learnt Never force a trickle Wait for the shower Written on:07/27/2016 Contest:'Create and Idiom' by Jesse Day

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Date: 8/3/2016 8:41:00 AM
I found your work well written, funny and entertaining. This poem is relatable and real. The idiom is creative and fit the theme of the poem very well. The contest was highly competitive which left out about 10 poems which were worthy of placement – including this one. As a matter of fact, if could list 11 places, you would make the list. Thanks for entering the contest and I will check out some more of your creative work!
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/3/2016 9:27:00 AM
Thanks Jesse for you kind comment!I appreciate the encouragement!

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