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Never Be Mine

Foiled again, how naive of me to think that you thought differently to him, to them, to anyone the games have only just begun How hard is it, to keep pretence and perch yourself upon the fence that separates and sits between decide which side appears more green I won't fight and I won't wait the boat has sailed but still sailed late You had a chance, your inch, your time you took your hands and covered mine but yours were never mine to hold same sad story, stale and old 14th June 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/14/2011 10:05:00 PM
Jodie, Congratulations on your contest entry! Thank you for entering your dedicated poem in my contest and also for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night. Sorry for the late congrats,..p.d
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Date: 7/14/2011 12:34:00 PM
Congratulations Jodie on your wonderful poem taking first place. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 7/13/2011 11:40:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Jodie. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 7/13/2011 10:41:00 AM
Congratulations Jodie for your win in the contest "best dedication poem" sponsored by P.D. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2011 10:14:00 AM
My Congratulations on your win sponsored by P.D...enjoyed..hugs..
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Date: 7/13/2011 8:18:00 AM
Congrats Jodie on another great win with this stirring and sensitive piece luv.. enjoy..
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Date: 7/13/2011 4:07:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., Jodie
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Date: 6/29/2011 5:47:00 AM
Congratulations Jodie on your win in the "Any First Year Poem on PS" contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:04:00 PM
ahh the heart wants what the heart wants, always a sad tale, congrad's on your fine verse winning, Light & Love [great meter!]
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Date: 6/28/2011 2:46:00 PM
Congrats Jodie on your first place win in the contest.. excellent entry..honored to be sharing ..luv..
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Date: 6/27/2011 7:52:00 AM
very beautiful its very meaningful
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Date: 6/14/2011 7:36:00 AM
your poem contains some good lines and some wise comments that may be taken as advice...I found myself wishing that it was a little longer...enjoyable!
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