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Never Again

The staircase to a bedroom of lies creaks, with worn out balusters from the palms of lovers that shook the handrail as they climbed...trapped with a honey smile beneath eyes of desire offered to quench their thirst for companionship paid for by illusions proffered as more than a splash of paint...used to cover rust, exposed from the dusty bones of dying love that fed on poison crumbs left to kill any memory, of each changing face that gave comfort and refuge to an endless cycle of drudgery when each time, you whisper in my ear I promise, never again 11/11/17

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Date: 11/14/2017 10:13:00 PM
A fine, rich piece of free verse worth many re-reads, Frederic. Well done, Sir. Regards, Viv
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Date: 11/12/2017 6:37:00 PM
Wow, what great imagery you used to bring to our minds the vision of this place and what it meant. Dark one and I LIKE it a lot!
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Date: 11/12/2017 8:53:00 AM
A free verse, can't remember the last time I saw you write a free verse.. This is very deep and an excellent poem..
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Date: 11/11/2017 9:00:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Frederic , you painted a beautiful vision of the staircase. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/11/2017 2:37:00 PM
Well-done; gripping imagery and, to me, it seeped darkness from the despair of heartache. Really got in to this one. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 11/11/2017 12:21:00 PM
This is how poetry should be written---what a cycle of thought it is!
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Date: 11/11/2017 10:50:00 AM
Wonderful imagery... well crafted poem. Very powerful, Frederic. I liked this very much.
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