Never a Child

I was never a child. 
Well, that’s not exactly true.
I was a child in both years and 
understanding of the ways of the world,
yet I carried the title “Man of the House,” 
bestowed upon me (innocently) by my mother 
when my father died at thirty-nine. 
I was twelve, a boy-king without a Cromwell.
I didn’t understand then the implications 
of my (ultimately) frightening new position. 
Was I to be my own father, a husband, make decisions?

When I actually became the man of the house, 
and realized the full meaning of my title, 
I’d already rejected the weight of the crown.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hicks Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 6:22 PM
Being the youngest of four I don't know what it's like to be "the man of the house". And I think having that title is years away from happening yet. I thought this had a really sweet ending. The crown is still there but when you really face the facts the weight seems to vanish. It's like a metaphor for life's hardships. God never gives us too much to handle, and as long as our heads are high we can persevere.
Carrillo Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 12:42 PM
Very well written. It is hard for a young boy to have such reponsibility. This is when I say - Life is not fare. I too didn't have much of a childhood. From what I remember it was always work, work, work and I'm not done yet. Have a great day. Lucilla
Jordan Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 1:58 PM
Thanks for reading my piece. Fortunately for me, life is much more fair these days. J
O'Haolin Whalen Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 7:55 PM
very well expressed free verse. They say "write about what you know" and this a very good example of doing just that. (am I right Jack?) A good write!
Jordan Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 10:10 PM
You are exactly right. Thanks for the kind comment. J
Tunks Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 11:13 PM
very nice!
Jordan Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 9:15 AM
Thank you for readng it. J
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