Nevaquaya-W

Nevaquaya, tall, fair and dewey-eyed, was he
A brave warrior but with an artist like heart, 
The whole village listened when he played his flute
That he made from the hollow reeds.
The warriors gathered around, women came to hear him
 His music moved their souls to passion.
Then their hearts were melted to pity.
Even the nature borrowed sweetness from his music.

Once in his roaming he met Nokomis
A beautiful maiden who fell in love at first sight
Enamored of his melodious music.
One day she was abducted by some natives
A captive of their desire’s lust.
But Nevaquaya did not lose the hope.
When he saw the full moon reflected
In the still water on shores of Gitche Gumee,
He played on his flute with alluring tunes
Of beauty, love and longing, of life undying
With a faint hope Nokomis will hear his music.
Even brooks ceased to murmur in the forest
The wood-birds ceased singing
And the rabbit sat upright to listen to his music
Nourishing a faint hope, Nokomis will hear his music.


Dr. Ram mehta
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First Place win in:
Contest: Tell His Story sponsored by Constance La France-A Rambling poet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 8:40 PM
on the shores of gitche Gumee! how cool is this congrad's on your verses moving forward! Light & Love
Brumley Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 7:24 PM
Congratulations on making the first cut Doc and good luck:)
Freeman Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 9:55 AM
Dr Ram, Good Luck! Congratulations on your poems' capture of the first round. Agape, Moses
George   Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 4:10 AM
Superb writing Dr. Ram . Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie
Sweetheart Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 2:31 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your featured poem this week on PS.. a most beautiful one to share with us all my friend with luv..
Neels Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 11:39 AM
hey there Dr. Ram congratulations on your first place win in Constance's contest with this beauty ;)
Taylor Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 7:11 AM
Congrats on a well written, well deserved First Place, Dr Ram. Beautiful story. Excellent. Kudos to you. Ralph
Haick Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 12:11 PM
Congratulations on your Ist Place win in Constance's "Tell His Story" Contest, Dr. Ram! Great work as usual! Love, Annalise
Freeman Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 11:22 AM
Always a pleasure to see you at the top, Dr Ram. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored first place. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 11:09 AM
Congratulations Dr. Ram on your super 1st place win in Constance's contest " Tell His Story". Love, Carol
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March 22, 2011 at 8:53 AM
Big congratulations on taking first place with this awesome poem, Dr. Ram! Love, Carolyn
George   Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 8:21 AM
Such a beautiful story you have woven, Dr. Ram, and so in tune with the picture. Many congra't on your so well-deserved FIRST PLACE WIN. lainie
Horne Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 8:06 AM
Beautiful poem, Dr Ram - congratulations on your Number One : ) Jack
Fillmore Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 7:50 AM
Congrats on your first place win for "Tell His Story" Dr. Ram! Carol
Richards Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 7:49 AM
Such a wonderful story, tender and romantic! Congratulations on your first place win!! Well deserved! ~ Carrie
Maverick Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 11:51 PM
Congratulations on the 1st place win Dr Ram.
Onclaud Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 11:37 PM
my happy cheers to you for the special win,dr.ram :) huggs, nette
Mannan Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:56 PM
An awesome story Dr. Ram and really deserved to be on the top. Heartiest congratulations for this win.
La France Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:27 PM
Congratulations Ram, on first place in my contest, I thought your poem was just wonderful. Could you please send me by soupmail, your address so I can forward, The Certificate of Achievement in Poetry, to you. which was the prize in this contest for First Place~~
Sweetheart Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:14 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your first place win in Tell His Story contest.. a special write depicting the theme of the contest perfectly ... enjoy your top spot luv.. sorry..yes I have my new Sophia Loren glasses on at all times now.. just got confused about poet's name on entry luv..thankxxx..appreciate..
Johnson Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:01 PM
Congraltulations Dr. Ram with your great win. Love, Joyce
Knop Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 8:42 AM
Enjoyed your great story, Dr. Ram! Best of luck in Constance's contest! And thank you for your kind comments...Have a great week!...Gert
Smith Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 5:16 PM
Amazing. I really enjoyed this one, Dr.Ram. Looking forward to reading more. Take care of yourself. Dana'lynn
Sweetheart Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 4:54 PM
Most exciting read Dr. Ram and a glorious write and entry for Constance.. good luck my friend.. a wonderful tale encompassing the entire photo ..happy weekend luv..
Kendrick Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 4:32 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest...I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for the encouraging words left on my blog..I am really sore today..Sara
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