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Nest Nesting breasting Basic learning's Growing up time Spreading wings practicing Flight calling hiding inner child Comfort zone fully blown exposing Which path life at stake human race Preparation from the nest put to the test Nesting breasting basic learning growing love

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Date: 8/12/2017 9:15:00 AM
There are so many thoughts going through my mind from poem. I think the main of me is the preparation we are given at a young age will colour how we handle life later. The Native peoples here talk about "unto the seventh generation". That is the preview of this generations responsibility. I think tis is a thought in your poem. The world wii shape by what we now teach our children. Very thoughtful and well written!
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Niall Fulham
Date: 8/12/2017 11:18:00 AM
Hi Patricia ,thank you very much for comments , leaving home for me was immigration at 18 years old luckily I was very street wise at the time ::))) hugs
Date: 7/24/2017 2:29:00 PM
Hello Niall,I have enjoyed this rhyme.Yes we are learning and growing. Have a nice day my friend.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 7/24/2017 2:45:00 PM
Hi Darlene , thank you for comment :))))))big hugs
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/24/2017 2:30:00 PM
Hugs.....
Date: 7/23/2017 10:27:00 PM
I love how this poem builds up and ends with love, great writing Niall
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Niall Fulham
Date: 7/24/2017 2:46:00 AM
Hi Lewis , thanks for comment , Love , love , love is all we have :)))
Date: 7/18/2017 8:05:00 AM
Love this cleverly written poem! :) hugs
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Niall Fulham
Date: 7/18/2017 11:54:00 AM
Hi Becca , hope your keeping well , thanks for comment ::))))hugs
Date: 7/17/2017 12:57:00 PM
Lovely write Niall :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 7/17/2017 3:28:00 PM
Hi Akkina , thanks Akkina :)))))))hugs
Date: 7/15/2017 4:33:00 PM
aww Niall my son has flown from the nest now so that final stanza resonates with me:-) hugs jan xx
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Niall Fulham
Date: 7/15/2017 4:42:00 PM
Hi Jan , glad you like Jan , ps he will not be short of a sense of humor growing up with you :))))))hugs
Date: 7/15/2017 3:08:00 PM
- Lovely and true, Niall - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 7/15/2017 3:43:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise , big happy weekend to you too , thanks for comment :))))))hugs
Date: 7/15/2017 1:22:00 PM
I like this one Niall :) xomo!
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Niall Fulham
Date: 7/15/2017 3:42:00 PM
Hi Maureen , thanks for comment :)))hugs

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