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The crow's fierce warning message rings Echoes across the dale the Dove's peaceful cooing cascades Silky sweet as a veil Over here-a caws the crow As the roosters join in Songbirds unnamed awake from slumber In soft chorus songs blend What does this day hold for each of God's animal kingdom Will the Dove raise her family To the phylum add some Nepal mourns her dead family Unexpected losses Recovery a long slow event The deaths, grief, life crosses

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/28/2015 11:46:00 PM
So sad the deaths and loss. Your poetry did capture that so well. A7...
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Date: 5/15/2015 2:15:00 PM
Such a tragedy Sara, then to be hit with a second Earthquake. Fine poetry dedication to such a sad moment, James...
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Date: 5/14/2015 11:37:00 AM
A great tragedy for Nepal you have done well. 7 i feel. Loved always,my sweet friend,bl
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Date: 5/13/2015 3:00:00 PM
Sara, your poem is so sad and moving, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, sad tears
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Date: 5/13/2015 1:43:00 PM
Hi Sara... stopping by to read some of your wonderful poems again. This one is very touching.. the sweet calls of nature vs. the cruel reality of what nature can do. Great write as always from your pen #7
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Date: 5/11/2015 5:43:00 AM
I'm happy you wrote about the epoch-making tragedy. You are such a blessed pen. So well knitted. 7+!
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Date: 5/11/2015 12:58:00 AM
Glad somebody wrote about that tragedy. U sara wrote such a great soulful dirge like poem for the quaked victims. Bravo to yer poet's pen. Nice to read frm u again.
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Date: 5/10/2015 5:20:00 PM
beautiful write here, my friend
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Date: 5/10/2015 2:44:00 PM
Interesting how you introduced the different bird song into this one, Sara. How tragic what happened there.
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Date: 5/10/2015 1:32:00 AM
This is a lovely yet sad reminder of the earthquake's aftermath and a beautiful people inside and out, picking up the shattered pieces! Our prayers can help them endure. 7
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Date: 5/9/2015 4:51:00 PM
Thoughtful words for a wounded country. It was such a nightmarish tragedy; you've penned a fitting tribute.
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Date: 5/9/2015 12:12:00 PM
- A major catastrophe and a deep sadness - Skillfully written, dear Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/9/2015 8:55:00 AM
a tragic day and the aftermath is too much to bear... such grief and you have expressed it well... nice pen Sara
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