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Nemesis-POTD

In the realm of battles waged by fate, Where heroes rise and villains bait, There dwells a force, unconquerable, vast, A nemesis, whose shadow is cast. With nefarious intent, it seeks to harm, An archenemy, a symbol of alarm. It weaves its web of darkness deep, Inflicting punishment vengefully does creep. No hero can escape its relentless grip. It thrives on conflicts, which none can skip. A generic motivation, it lacks, Driven only by the thrill of attacks Its hubris knows no bounds; it knows no shame. It believes it is beyond any blame. But in the realm of battles, there lies a truth Hubris and nemesis are intertwined, as wisdom and youth. The nemesis, with its cunning ways, Lures hubris into a treacherous maze. It tempts the ego, fuels the fire, Until the hubris burns, consumed by desire, In the face of adversity, heroes must stand tall. To face the nemesis and conquer it all. But beware oh brave ones, of the hubris within. For it blinds the wise, leading to their own sin. In the realm of battles waged by fate, Where heroes rise and villains bait, There dwells a force, unconquerable, vast, A nemesis, whose shadow is cast. With nefarious intent, it seeks to harm, An archenemy, a symbol of alarm. But through perseverance and strength of will, The heroes rise, and versus all odds, they fulfill They learn from the past, the mistakes they've made, And with newfound wisdom, they start to evade. Word Bank 1/ Hubris: Excessive pride, presumption, or arrogance Grandiose belief in one's personal ability, privilege, or infallibility 2/ Nemesis: A long-standing rival, downfall, or ruination of someone or something
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Hamilton Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 9:59 AM
What a majestic write dear poet, full of meaning, yes the world is full of hubris, it really is at the root of war and strife. Congrats on a great write worthy of potd!
Kauffman Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 10:59 AM
Lasaad, congratulations on your POTD! There is much in our world that pulls us into a black hole of "hubris," but it is with a hero's heart that we stand and resist its pull! You have articulated this truth with such vibrant elegance of imagery. Your words vibrate with a nobility of a warrior's heart. Congratulations, dear friend, on your POTD honor! So happy for you!
Baker Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 2:59 PM
Glad to see your poem on the Top 100 New Poems list, my dear friend. Kudos! Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 5:34 AM
Congratulations, Lasaad, on POTD!
Cunningham Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 12:54 AM
Excellent writing Lasaad, congratulations to on your POTD honours. Tom
Nicole Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 6:18 PM
The opposite of pride is humility, which many in the world lack. Sad, indeed. The battle is within, and must be faced by each individual. Your thoughts are so deep and powerful, Lasaad. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 6:05 PM
Congratulations on your excellent poem, Dear Poet. Truly enjoyed.
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July 26, 2023 at 6:04 PM
Congratulations on POTD, what an amazing gift in writing, thanks for sharing with us all
Hind Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 2:50 PM
Wow congrats on your POTD! I liked this; I really wish we could all just be- and get along! Love the truth in your poetry!
May Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 2:07 PM
Well penned Sotto, Congrrats on POTD
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 12:18 PM
- A wonderful poem, Las :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - (been away on holiday for a while) - hugs
Anaya Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 8:48 AM
I played the video you embedded, O Fortuna while reading the epic "Nemesis" dramatic. Alive with vibrancy. Whether humble or haughty, like Don Quixote, some will always be tempted to march into hell for a heavenly cause! Congratulations to you, Lasaad Sotto Poet on an admirable POTD! Hugs A fav "Be humble for you are made of the earth. Be noble for you are made of the stars_Serbian Proverbs
Pandit Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 8:25 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Lasaad. Enjoy your special day today.
Baker Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 8:23 AM
Full of wisdom and Truth, a well-deserved POTD for you, my friend. A FAV to add to my list, to read again. Congratulations on this fine poetry. Repeating verse one as verse seven worked great for emphasis. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us through your poetry, my dear friend. Bill
Goldsmith Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 8:07 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "Nemesis" is a wonderful Rhyme write. I enjoyed it. Have a great day with your win.................
Sands Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 7:40 AM
Congratulations for POTD :) Enjoy
Volumes Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 7:32 AM
:) I told you so !
George Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 6:42 AM
Congratulations dear Lasaad on your POTD for your great poem.
M  Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 6:29 AM
Congratulations on POTD Lasaad….lovely to see your name up in lights!! Ha….Debx
Kitchin Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 6:26 AM
Lasaad, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD1
Lindley Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 5:33 AM
Big congratulations on this excellent poem be chosen as the POTD MY FRIEND. A true pleasure to read and understand that life is ever searching and ever evading the evil in this dark world. A fav.. God bless.
Tor Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 5:27 AM
Big congratulations Lasaad. another incredible example of your gifted abilities as a writer. Been away and just saw and read this marvelous work of yours. Big congratulations again for receiving such a worthy Honor of Poem Of The Day. Your Poetry talent is much appreciated by all of us and especially The Poetry Soup Judges...
Lawrence Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 5:25 AM
Loved the dance you have brilliantly created dear Sotto ! A classic for sure . I could see it spoken aloud on stage ! Wisdom abounds ! A fav! Big congratulations on POTD. Hugs, Susan :)
Gentile Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 4:02 AM
Sotto, congratulations on your POTD honors!! Poetic wisdom so beautifully expressed! Enjoy your day!
Proxenos Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 3:35 AM
A wonderful eloquent write with the certain stamp of talented poet written all over it - congratulations dear friend on the honor of POTD being awarded to you - enjoy every moment of today hugs and blessings Jennifer
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