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Negatives

All Negative Unexplained fears, when occupy your mind, Increase the agony of the otherwise kind ! Unrealistic world, Selfishness the only truth, Dreams crash down, when we open our eyes ! Untrustworthy relations, Faith is a mere word, Inconstant affections, unabided by vows! Unpleasant thoughts, Lacking an affirmative, One strong decision, can undo all negative ! Written October 20th, 2014 Poet- Dr. Upma A. Sharma

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Date: 10/23/2014 4:20:00 PM
Now with all this negativity around us we need some positive reinforcement so hugs my friends. Nice poem. love phyl
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Date: 10/22/2014 9:16:00 AM
negativity is an all encompassing truth of the lives of most people... Really good write... :)
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Date: 10/21/2014 4:24:00 PM
I hope it is true that one can undo all negative. For some people it is such a very hard task for them to rise above a life of negativity. Good topic!
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Date: 10/20/2014 3:56:00 PM
Yes, true...You are absolutely right dear Poet...We need proper solution...Kal chakro se kaise banch sakta hoo, jindegi asman se bara hona chahiye...Lekin hum apna dil se vi chhota ho giya...Bohut sukria Bangalse....
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Date: 10/20/2014 1:51:00 PM
Very true Dr. Sharma. The solution as you say is in the last two lines. Perfect.
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