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Needing a Granted Wish

How street lamps cast a pallid light, Which bleeds, through this angst I bestow On thoughts dim … flamed by an invite To leave a dwelling, soul of woe While ambling far one rose held tight; A wish faint and falling quite low : The smudge of rain, its drop a haze Which grips a widowed time’s malaise. Could another place find my voice Where suffering eases life’s thorns? How tears plunge, my words cannot hoist My wail for guidance when eve mourns When fate, harsh, won’t let me rejoice This new dawn till time’s grace adorns, A rising hope , my second chance… To dance again as years advance. Let Your Pen Drip Contest Sponsor: Broken Wings 5/22/2018 Theme: A wish faint and falling

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Date: 6/5/2018 9:08:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, nette. Superbly done.
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Date: 5/23/2018 10:34:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this impressive write, well done ~
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Date: 5/23/2018 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations Nette :)
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Date: 5/22/2018 9:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done.
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Date: 5/22/2018 4:49:00 AM
Wondrous writing artfully expressed dear, nette! Good luck!
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Date: 5/21/2018 7:59:00 PM
Nette, Intelligent and Beautiful.. my favorite partnership!
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Date: 5/21/2018 4:23:00 PM
Graceful and elegant..your words flow in style..a superb depiction, nette.
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Date: 5/21/2018 3:53:00 PM
A wondrous write Nette, indeed your pen does drip...liquid gold! A winner for sure!
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Date: 5/21/2018 2:37:00 PM
Oh nette! I was in awe of this poem. Especially, "to dance again as years progress" Coincidentally, read my 40 years poem speaking of dancing again. You will definitely win!
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Date: 5/21/2018 2:01:00 PM
- Always a second chance ... love the ending, Nette - A beautiful writing - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/21/2018 1:30:00 PM
Beautiful , with lines that pull the reader in. I love the ending of the rising hope :)
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