Needing a Granted Wish

How street lamps cast a pallid light,
    Which bleeds, through this angst I bestow
    On thoughts dim … flamed by an invite
    To leave a dwelling, soul of woe
    While ambling far       one  rose held tight;
    A wish faint and falling quite low :
    The smudge of rain, its drop a haze
    Which  grips a widowed time’s malaise.

Could another place find my voice
    Where suffering eases life’s thorns?
    How tears plunge, my  words cannot hoist
    My  wail for guidance when eve mourns
    When fate, harsh, won’t let me rejoice
    This new dawn    till time’s grace adorns,
    A rising hope , my  second chance…
    To dance again as years advance.



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Theme: A wish faint and falling
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Gauthier Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 9:08 PM
Congrats on your top win, nette. Superbly done.
La France Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 10:34 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this impressive write, well done ~
Sands Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 7:40 AM
Congratulations Nette :)
Gentry Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 9:13 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 4:49 AM
Wondrous writing artfully expressed dear, nette! Good luck!
Man Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 7:59 PM
Nette, Intelligent and Beautiful.. my favorite partnership!
Pandit Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 4:23 PM
Graceful and elegant..your words flow in style..a superb depiction, nette.
Hamilton Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 3:53 PM
A wondrous write Nette, indeed your pen does drip...liquid gold! A winner for sure!
Sergi Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 2:37 PM
Oh nette! I was in awe of this poem. Especially, "to dance again as years progress" Coincidentally, read my 40 years poem speaking of dancing again. You will definitely win!
Andresen Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 2:01 PM
- Always a second chance ... love the ending, Nette - A beautiful writing - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 1:30 PM
Beautiful , with lines that pull the reader in. I love the ending of the rising hope :)
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