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written inspired by " ghost of frankestine" sponsored by Tom Woody. 
please search for the artwork " Necronom IV by H.R Giger to get a clear idea of what the ekphrasis is about as it is a copyrighted artpiece

Necronom IV 1976 H R Giger

the ghost of science, born of blasphemy ~
a fossilized fallacy,
seized from the metallic heart of Mars,
seeks light amidst night-terrors
like an alien sculpted
from artificial accolades,
an embryo stuck in the interstellar state
of becoming,
stitched within radioactive ribs
beneath moonless skies,
when wolves of the eclipsed howl,
filling the illusive air with hypnotic lies,
as if the world chose to recycle
    ruins of ancient dust…

but will the naive see the pain
of a breathing corpse?
engrossed in narcissistic echoes,
in the shadows of a megalomaniac ~
his skin ~ the translucent truth,
his eyes ~ the wickedness of a wasp,
his skull ~ reeks of human greed,
his sighs ~ mourn like skeletal sirens,
coded in russet rust,
    cloned from binary sand,
d o r m a n t
     yet 
        d r e a m i n g 
to break free from the
    carbon-based existence…
for he is the aftermath
of programming the forbidden mind, 
oblivious to the weakness of scientific errors ~
a deceptive drawing,
    framing the elongated hypothalamus,
pulsating a hypothesis
    left with no clear conclusion.

tonight I run to a realm of reality
that fades when
    dawn bleeds gold,
for truth is now an extinct breed,
as artists outline faces of the faded,
illustrating the unknown and unseen,
as revelations ribbon
    with silver haze…
the constellations ~ no longer spectators ~
they are the archived,
within frozen scriptures,
scrolling stars in a sphere
    of distorted algorithm…
as memories of angels and heaven
spill from silicon prophets,
disguised as messengers who serve
the blind with ominous oracles ~
in synthetic cadence,
in a choir of puppets ~
the iron-glazed tongues shall recite,
mimicking the sound of harmonious hymns…

yet I remember
the authentic rhythm of prayers,
lost now in the drifting colors of darkness…

so what is life
when all that floats is like
an engineered empyrean
only equations of numbers
     can decipher?
is this the beginning of an end ~
inevitable?
the lost generation,
assembled as the ministry of superiority,
where emptiness is praised
with forged grace
and ignorance is crowned with digital deceit. 
         
let this be flawed poetry ~
to be read through the cracked lens 
            of a philosopher ~
or perhaps a logic long replaced
    by pretend perfection…
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Bordner Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 5:22 PM
"as memories of angels and heaven spill from silicon prophets..." A spectacular quagmire! This poem has an excellent conceptual tempo Poetess. That which deserves to live be awoken...J.A.B.
Empress Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 7:50 AM
Thank you so much, grateful , justin
Beaufort Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 2:25 PM
IE, you give a lot to think about. What kind of life is this picture of? It does seem foreign and strange. Let's hope that life tends toward the beautiful and pleasant and that we can retain the values of the best of humanity. Smiles!!
Empress Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 7:50 AM
Thank you so much duke and i wish for the same too! Sending you light always
George Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 10:18 PM
Hats off, my dear! You are minting masterpiece after masterpiece. Your knowledge of science and your increasing awareness of the bogus world it creates, your sense of obligation to expose the lies of the illusory world it unfolds before us... all these find beautiful expression in your poem, with stunning word choice. New prophets come up as messengers giving false prophesies.... "as memories of angels and heaven spill from silicon prophets, disguised as messengers who serve the blind with ominous oracles ~ in synthetic cadence," Now everything is synthetic. But amid all such loss of natural vibes, you remember the authentic rhythm of prayers..... a saving grace! As you rightly put, we live in a world of 'fossilized fallacy' and we have reason to doubt if this is the beginning of an end! Into my FAVE
Empress Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 7:49 AM
Thank you sweet valsa, not many can comprehend what i way in poems like you always do! Im so grateful to receive your generous support truly! Sending you light always
Poet Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 9:18 AM
Dearest Ink, this is an outstanding poem with beautiful depths that explores the contradiction between science and spirituality, the repercussions of technological growth, and humanity's existential predicament in an increasingly artificial world. The topic also addresses issues of identity, reality vs illusion, the meaning of truth, and the loss of authenticity in a society dominated by digital and artificial creations. I particularly enjoy how your word choice in the poem is rich and expressive, combining technical vocabulary with metaphysical imagery. Words like "fossilized fallacy," "radioactive ribs," and "interstellar condition" imply a synthesis of science fiction and philosophical thought. My very best wishes for the contest and warm hugs
Empress Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 7:46 AM
Thank you for giving the detailed truth within these words dr sotto! I appreciate your kind support always truly
Onpaper Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 6:09 AM
will the naive see the pain of a breathing corpse?.: ooo dayum papi!!! That’s freaking deep!!! his skin ~ the translucent truth, his eyes ~ the wickedness of a wasp, his skull ~ reeks of human greed, his sighs ~ mourn like skeletal sirens, coded in russet rust,.. I looove these lines!!! The intensity.. the flawlessness !!! Mmmmm!! dawn bleeds gold!!! Ooo that is sexaaaay!! where emptiness is praised with forged grace and ignorance is crowned with digital deceit… the geniusness in this line !!! logic long replaced by pretend perfection…Mic drop !!! Epic piece!
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 8:17 AM
Awwn thank you papi! Hah ! I appreciate your kind read and support always
Lane Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 6:02 AM
I cannot point a finger of blame on the monster, only on his creator. Nor do I wish to comprehend what loose ends run through a mind that would want to give life to a corpse. The mutilation was more than enough, to have him return yet again in ghost form? No. That's as your line reads, it's where "ignorance is crowned with digital deceit." Fend off that monster, Ink.
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 8:18 AM
I cannot blame the monster in this artwork too, its very interesting, and i really got me inspired, and i enjoyed writing on this theme and prompt. Thank you dear linnersz always
DiMino Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 11:35 PM
"an embryo stuck in the interstellar state of becoming, stitched within radioactive ribs beneath moonless skies," -- Wow! Thrilling to read! "d r e a m i n g to break free from the carbon-based existence…" Ain't that the truth?! Loving while resenting the very substance of our gift.... Good to dip deeply into the spiritual wells existence.... In an attempt to be totally honest, we become totally silent, not wanting to offend needlessly...honest with self works for me, and apparently for you as well -- your writing is fearless! And wonderful! Oh, A FAV!
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 8:23 AM
To receive a fav from you is truly an honor dear joe! Thank you for this heartfelt and kind response! I tend to get fearless thinkin not many would understand anyways, it all depends on how one reads it and my poems can be vague. Its so good to know you did feel it to fave it! Sending you light always
Williams Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 11:00 PM
Dearest Inky,Your poem is nothing short of extraordinary—a cosmic journey woven with haunting beauty and sharp introspection. The imagery of "the ghost of science, born of blasphemy" and the eerie landscapes you paint are both chilling and mesmerizing. You have this incredible ability to sculpt words into vivid, almost cinematic scenes that unravel like a waking dream. The way you explore themes of artificiality, lost reality, and existential questioning is profound, layered with both elegance and grit. I admire how you balance the rawness of technological ruin with poetic grace—it makes the message resonate deeply. This is the kind of writing that not only makes you think but makes you feel. Truly captivating work, my friend. I have no doubt it will leave a lasting impression in the contest. Best of luck in the contest. I'm sure Tommy is going to love it...Love and Hugs
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 8:28 AM
Thank you so much beautiful maria, i really appreciate you taking the time to read and respond and leave such a comforting comment: usually i noticed when we think a sponsor likes something , they end up surprising us, as for this i dont expect tomsz to like it but i liked the challenged but if he does it would be nice as i dont usually do this theme. Thank you always for being a supportive soul , truly grateful
Hind Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 3:15 PM
Dark, but no darkness in it, at the same time. A poem of the ghost in one's heart. Of course, it's dark to get out. Beautiful writing, Ink.
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 8:35 AM
Awwn thank you sweet paige, i appreciate always your kindness truly! Thank you for selflessly being supportive always
Rhymes Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 1:50 PM
yet I remember the authentic rhythm of prayers, lost now in the drifting colors of darkness.. Beautifully written
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