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Nebulous Thoughts Clouding My Brain

Deep restless thoughts that eddied in midnight disclosure, My old mind shivered in traumatic tribulations. No treats for dissolute persons to seal composure. My mind filled with moths and other abominations. I dreaded the spooky strength of my demon nightmare, Defying all useless urges of vigilant trance, Perpetual murmur of unceasing burbled fare, Moonlit wintry rays indulge in a macabre dance. Relinquish all dreams that cloud my old illicit thoughts, Grab sturdy roots, get out of that pit, aim at my goal, Can't let my senses get dulled but avoid useless rots, Saunter steadily in love which is life for my soul

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Harry Horsman

Date: 10/31/2022 8:59:00 PM

Great poem, for scary Halloween, Victor. Love the last stanza, a way out into the light. Love it. Harry

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/31/2022 12:15:00 PM

- Thoughts and images that steal away the night's sleep - I know nights like that, Victor - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/30/2022 4:22:00 PM

A beautiful trip dear Victor. Rise above the dark and saunter on to love!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/30/2022 2:27:00 PM

Keep sauntering towards love and soon those moths will turn into butterflies :)

Judy Ball

Date: 10/30/2022 1:50:00 PM

Perfect for this time of year. It's easy to get caught up in dark thoughts when everyone around you is trying to be a witch or something. Good stuff Victor. God Bless, JB

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/30/2022 11:14:00 AM

Resisting the macabre dance of dark thoughts and dreams can be difficult during a long restless night. But the sunshine of morning always returns. I love the optimism and resolution in your poem's final line. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2022 10:29:00 AM

wow, it's almost like a Halloween poem, Victor. Spooky and dark thoughts here.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/30/2022 10:29:00 AM

Victor, I have nebulous days too and feel the way you do. I can’t find peace of mind after all me and mine have been through and still are. Excellent write… Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/30/2022 8:13:00 AM

Victor, you did a wonderful job of expressing how you feel. There are occasions when a tumultuous evening finds itself in a dangerous area. The resolution you provided in the final stanza is interesting to me.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/30/2022 6:52:00 AM

Muddle brains try to invade our living, but somehow, we overcome. Blessings friend.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/30/2022 5:49:00 AM

Sometimes a restless night wanders into dark territory. I like your solution in the ending stanza. Emotions so well conveyed, Victor.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/30/2022 4:46:00 AM

Sometimes those thoughts fill our heads and there seems to be no way out of them. Often some sort of distraction helps. Tom

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 10/30/2022 3:29:00 AM

Delusion to illumination ~ love alone is real

Valsa George

Date: 10/29/2022 11:25:00 PM

Thus you have found your own solution to get out of the muddled thoughts and not to grow restless by the macabre dance. Yes, saunter through the green pastures of love! Great penning, Victor !