Nebulous Streams Clouding My Brain Premiere Contest Winner


Nebulous streams, clouding my brain
     hoping my thoughts will fall like rain.
Thunder and lightning mix the brew
     stirring the words soon to break thru.

Pressure builds up, clouds turn dark gray
     swirling and twirling, find their way,
freeing the weight of thoughts that flow
     down from the clouds to grow below.

Falling to weave creative streams
     nourishing thoughts into word dreams,
forming soon a landscape divine...
     rainbow of poems that are mine.


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Premiere Contest: What Was I Thinking?
Sponsor: Daniel Turner
Rules: Choose one line from sponsor's poem below
           and write a poem.  I chose his first line.
Judged: 12/19/2016


Between The Lines,  by Daniel Turner

Nebulous streams, clouding my brain
Vapor trail dreams, from paper airplanes
Cherry red glow, watch with no chain
Ribbons and bows, tied to the flames

Anchors on strings, hanging from sails
Bells that don't ring, throw down the pail
Falling through cracks, greased by the sale
Hearts made of wax, sent through the mail

Waterfall wishes on stars with no swings
Broken blue dishes stuck to the king
Photos with glitches on invisible wings
Temptation itches on all living things

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/5/2017 11:54:00 AM
BACK AGAIN TO READ , this excellent poem. Congrats on a well deserved first place win!! Adding to my fav list...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/5/2017 8:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robert, for the nice visit and very supportive comment and congrats...and the Fav! Sandra
Date: 12/22/2016 10:23:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Sandra, Congratulations!! :) Diane
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/27/2016 7:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Diane! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/20/2016 12:17:00 PM
Congrats with topping the table with this excellent poem, well deserved win stephen
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2016 8:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Stephen! Sandra
Date: 12/20/2016 10:39:00 AM
Such a fabulous poem, Sandra. Congrats for topping the chart. Huggss...Afzal
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2016 8:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Afzal. Sandra
Date: 12/20/2016 9:29:00 AM
Excellent!!!...my friend Sandra...Congrats!!!...a beautifully orchestrated couplet...I love the flow and wording...god bless...^WW^
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2016 8:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, WW! Sandra
Date: 12/20/2016 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on this superb poem and your fine win. I had narrowed my choices down to that verse and his last verse, finally the last verse hit me right away with the first four verses of my poem submitted. Great choice and a pleasure to read this great poem you have birthed.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2016 8:01:00 PM
Thank you very much, Robert! Sandra
Date: 12/20/2016 6:57:00 AM
Congrats Sandra on your win, this was perfect for the contest. Nicely done.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2016 8:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Chris! Sandra
Date: 12/20/2016 4:53:00 AM
Congratulations Sandra! The line you chose was a winning path through the mist.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2016 8:01:00 PM
Thank you very much, Darren. Sandra
Date: 12/20/2016 3:50:00 AM
A beautifully chaotic poem - what a wonderful way to describe what we all go through while writing. Congratulations! X
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2016 8:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Leileah! Sandra
Date: 12/20/2016 1:50:00 AM
This is excellent, Sandra, no doubt it is the trophy winner :) a 7 and a fave:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2016 8:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jo. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/19/2016 11:51:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, congrats on the win, Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2016 8:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tamal! Sandra
Date: 12/19/2016 8:25:00 PM
Congratulations Sandra .....beautiful write with a great flow....
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2016 8:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Meenakshi! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/19/2016 8:09:00 PM
Very good, Sandra, congratulations on your win... :) I didn't even try couldn't come up with anything. Hugs Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2016 8:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/19/2016 7:47:00 PM
Sandra : ) Great concept and process.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2016 8:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Doug! Sandra
Date: 12/19/2016 6:47:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Sandra
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2016 8:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph! Sandra
Date: 12/19/2016 6:18:00 PM
A 7+ for this great, imaginative poem, Sandra. Congrats on well-deserved top win. Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2016 8:04:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janice! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/19/2016 6:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your first placement Sandra. A poet's poem, and so deserving! 7 ; )
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2016 8:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/19/2016 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations Mrs Sandra on your winning poem. To me your poem seemed as if you might have been channeling my thoughts. Excellent rhyme and flow and just a wonderful poem. Thank you for your participation:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2016 7:56:00 PM
Daniel, thanks so much for a most inspiring contest. I really liked having to choose one sentence from your imaginative poem to inspire my poem. I am pleased that you enjoyed it and appreciate my wonderful placement in your first contest! Sandra
Date: 12/19/2016 5:40:00 PM
Congratulations on the gold! So exciting ... CayCay
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2016 8:05:00 PM
Thank you very much, CayCay! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/19/2016 4:49:00 PM
Wonderful write Sandra congrats on a top win, no surprise here!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2016 8:05:00 PM
Thank you very much, John! Sandra
Date: 12/19/2016 4:46:00 PM
Congrats!!! Sandra...beautifuly crafted my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 12/19/2016 4:17:00 PM
Daniel has presented us with a wonderful contest I think Sandra. I am reading so many entries but I just love the entries in this contest, yours included. I don't know how Daniel will decide on his winning list. I wouldn't want to be in his shoes right now. Have a happy holiday my friend! 7 ; )
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Date: 12/19/2016 6:52:00 AM
I love this poem, Sandra - such joy for me reading all the way thru then the last line wrapped it up with love. I got goosebumps! CayCay
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