Linda Alice Fowler Poet Terza Rima

Near Flawless

In solitude I find silence, in silence I find my voice
In my voice there is song, in my song there is praise
My words near flawless, my ardent aria is Rejoice!

In pneuma I find solace, in solace I upraise 
In upraising I see Christ, in Christ I see salvation
My servitude near flawless, my sins abrase 

In my heart I have joy, in joy I have jubilation
In jubilation I feel triumph, in triumph I am victorious
My victory near flawless, my fear is not damnation

In reality I am imperfect, in imperfection I am inglorious
My willingness near flawless, my transformation glorious

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Victor Buhagiar March 19, 2023 at 12:43 PM Lovely way of composing a poem. So many images. PS I never reply to comments on my poetry unless really needed. I accept all comments. Linda Alice Fowler March 19, 2023 at 1:14 PM Thank you dear friend. I'm glad to know you are well Victor. :)

Harry Horsman March 19, 2023 at 2:01 AM I'd say 'Flawless' Linda, especially the imagery and poetry. harry Linda Alice Fowler March 19, 2023 at 7:26 AM Hello dear Harry. Your kind comments warms me. Thank you! :)

Sotto Poet March 18, 2023 at 2:10 PM Lovely writing, Linda. Enjoyed reading this, best wishes for the contest Linda Alice Fowler March 18, 2023 at 3:22 PM I'm glad you enjoyed this Las. Thanks for the comment and wishes. :)

Paula Goldsmith March 18, 2023 at 12:10 PM I love this write. Good Luck. Have a blessed day................ Linda Alice Fowler March 18, 2023 at 1:16 PM Thank you dear Paula! Have. great weekend! hugs :)