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Near Flawless

In solitude I find silence, in silence I find my voice In my voice there is song, in my song there is praise My words near flawless, my ardent aria is Rejoice! In pneuma I find solace, in solace I upraise In upraising I see Christ, in Christ I see salvation My servitude near flawless, my sins abrase In my heart I have joy, in joy I have jubilation In jubilation I feel triumph, in triumph I am victorious My victory near flawless, my fear is not damnation In reality I am imperfect, in imperfection I am inglorious My willingness near flawless, my transformation glorious

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Date: 3/19/2023 12:43:00 PM
Lovely way of composing a poem. So many images. PS I never reply to comments on my poetry unless really needed. I accept all comments.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/19/2023 1:14:00 PM
Thank you dear friend. I'm glad to know you are well Victor. :)
Date: 3/19/2023 2:01:00 AM
I'd say 'Flawless' Linda, especially the imagery and poetry. harry
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/19/2023 7:26:00 AM
Hello dear Harry. Your kind comments warms me. Thank you! :)
Date: 3/18/2023 2:10:00 PM
Lovely writing, Linda. Enjoyed reading this, best wishes for the contest
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/18/2023 3:22:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed this Las. Thanks for the comment and wishes. :)
Date: 3/18/2023 12:10:00 PM
I love this write. Good Luck. Have a blessed day................
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/18/2023 1:16:00 PM
Thank you dear Paula! Have. great weekend! hugs :)

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