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Nature's Winter

Autumn and the birds left real fast,
                               
Autumn's time had past.
                                             
Winter will bring in a huge contrast,
                             
the winds will make the weather forecast.
The land is now covered in pretty white snow,
               
it has a diamond's shinny glow.
                                     
On the streets one needs to go slow,
                             
by air even slow goes the old crow.
The bears winter in a cave,
                                       
no food they will crave.
                                               
They are waiting for a heat wave,
                                 
springtime will make them again brave.
Date Written:1/10/2023
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 2/5/2023 3:41:00 AM
You've painted a fantastic view of winter my dear friend Paula. I love the diamond's shinny glow. Hope we have winter here even once. Congratulations on your win my dear friend and this wonderful write! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/5/2023 8:00:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my painted winter write. Hugs... Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..................
Date: 1/25/2023 5:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win Paula, Very nicely penned
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/27/2023 9:11:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my "Nature's Winter" write. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..................
Date: 1/25/2023 6:39:00 AM
A sweet winter write Paula. Congratulations! :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/25/2023 12:23:00 PM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my write. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..................
Date: 1/24/2023 6:38:00 PM
Paula, a sweet winter poem, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/25/2023 12:22:00 PM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your "12 Lines of Rhyme - Winter Nature Themed Contest." Thank You for the placement and for having this fun contest. I enjoyed writing it. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..................
Date: 1/20/2023 2:26:00 PM
Nice Monorhyming, great metaphorically, enjoyed.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/25/2023 12:18:00 PM
Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..................
Date: 1/10/2023 4:44:00 PM
Paula, you have a lovely way with words. This was such a fun and interesting read for me! Your creative skills as well as the metaphors you use are both stunning.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/11/2023 11:50:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your very kind words. You made my day happy. (Thanks) Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..................

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