Nature's Shrine

dainty daisy sings
welcoming elusive spring
and clouds forming rings

chicks peek from warm nests
mother bird tiredly rests
robin puffs its chest

meadow with blooms shine
man for his lost lover pine
on nature's soft shrine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 11:53 PM
tahera, you made some lovely rhymes in this set. Congrats on your win.
Guzzi Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 6:48 PM
congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Jones Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 1:25 PM
These are wonderful..congratulations
Poet Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 12:11 PM
Just beautiful Tahera!Congrats on your win.
May Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 6:34 AM
wonderful haiku Tahera.....congrats on your win
Andresen Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 1:20 AM
- A winning haiku, with great quality Rahera !! - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 8:16 PM
Tahera :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA
Poet Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 8:33 AM
Congrats Tahera on your wonderful win in the contest!--kashinath
Kendrick Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 4:03 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
George   Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 1:02 PM
Simply beautiful, Tahera.Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
Neels Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 11:34 AM
Beautiful imagery Tahera, congrats on your win in Carol's contest my friend.. ;-)
Freeman Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 10:37 AM
Such a pleasure to see you Tahera near the top with this worthy fifth place beauty. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 9:37 AM
Such beautiful imagery, Tahera! Congratulations on your win with this descriptive haiku series. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 6:27 AM
Congratulations on the win in my contest Tahera. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
Gorelick Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 8:20 PM
Congrats to you..this is sweet.BG
Johnson Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 4:20 PM
Spring brings out everybody, that's for sure. Lcongratulations Tahera. Love, Joyce
Onclaud Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 2:50 PM
quite stirring , tahera… my happy cheers to you for the special win :) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 2:38 PM
Congrats Tahera on your super cool win in Carol's contest with this expressive entry my friend.. enjoy another top ten sweet success luv..
Mehta Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 2:28 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Carol, Tahera
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 2:12 PM
A nice image that is: nature's soft shrine! congrats on this one, sweetie!
Chappell Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 1:15 AM
very nice my friend sorry excellent write here
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 11:37 PM
Hey, you did pretty good with these, Tahera. My favorite is the middle one. Love that robin imagery! Oh, and the singing daisy too!
La France Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 1:45 PM
This is so "pretty" Tahera, each one a gem~~
Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 7:54 AM
Good luck in the contest with this sure winner...Warms me within and without...Your kind comments encourages me..Sara
M V Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 2:19 AM
Beautful word pictures,Tahera.Great work.Belated thanks for congrats.Same to you too.
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