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Natures Return

proud hurricane makes it's premier lashing, tormenting the STRATOSPHERE swirling in an ominous degree black clouds above siphon the SEA devastated earth takes toil awaiting re-birth, nurtured SOIL

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Molly Cooper

Date: 7/21/2010 4:47:00 PM

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G write rick!!! ~ Love Mols

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/21/2010 10:43:00 AM

Here I sit with lots to do,....... but.......I would rather read poetry written by you. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration Rick. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/20/2010 9:18:00 PM

nice one good luck Rick

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/20/2010 8:52:00 PM

I think you came pretty close from what he was saying in his rules. I don't think you needed to worry about rhymes. I think when he said "rhyme the last words" he meant to use the same letter of the alphabet for each of the words you choose for the final words of each couplet. In any event, that is a pretty cool added feature now that you have rhyme in there as well. Andrea

Skat A

Date: 7/20/2010 8:34:00 PM

WELL DONE RICK.-SKAT

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 7/20/2010 6:02:00 PM

great one rick, good luck my favorites are the beginning and the ending such cool lines