Kristen Bruni Poet Rubaiyat

Nature's Picasso

Mountains of ego and pride
Water where stars collide
Trees perfectly placed to add flare
Your soul becomes free not tied.

The love of the sky rests on us
The blue creates such a fuss
White blanket draped over to cover
Added detail always a plus

Together nature forms this art
It's painted with such heart
The intelligence of nature unleashed
To appreciate, not torn apart.

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Sara Kendrick April 29, 2011 at 2:16 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta April 27, 2011 at 9:08 AM Congratulationbs on the second place win in the contest, kristen

Meera Jyothilekshmi April 27, 2011 at 9:00 AM Dear kristen, superb title!a very good poem.congratulations on your deserving win.

Gautami Phookan April 27, 2011 at 8:41 AM A beautiful nature poem and I loved the last lines. Many Congrats Kristen on your big win.Love, gautami

John Freeman April 27, 2011 at 8:10 AM A classic Kristen, a special, those last two lines. Great to see you at the top with this lovely poem. Congratulations on your special entry's second place. Agape, Moses

Tahera Mannan April 27, 2011 at 3:30 AM Ths painting is stunning. Many congrats Kristen.

Carolyn Devonshire April 26, 2011 at 3:31 PM Beautiful, Kristen. I especially love the last two lines. We are entrusted with the beauty of nature and it is our duty to protect it. Congratulations on your success in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne April 26, 2011 at 1:03 PM Many congrats on your big win : )

Joyce Johnson April 26, 2011 at 12:56 PM aClngratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 26, 2011 at 12:11 PM Congrats Kristen on your 2nd place win in John's contest with this perfect poem..using the new form.. enjoy your top spot with luv.. awesome...

Carol Sunshine Brown April 26, 2011 at 12:00 PM Congratulations Kristen on your win in the John Moses Freeman's contest "Rubaiyat". Love, Carol

James Fraser April 26, 2011 at 11:53 AM Mega congratulations on your second place win Kristen (((( applause )))) well done with this lovely take on the image.....:) smiles

Elaine George April 26, 2011 at 10:49 AM Beautiful, Kristen. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie

Caryl Muzzey April 26, 2011 at 10:43 AM Congratulations on 2nd place win with this beauty. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Caryl

Nette Onclaud April 13, 2011 at 10:52 PM stimulating read, kristen.. winning luck to you! :) huggs, nette

Carol Sunshine Brown April 13, 2011 at 10:11 AM I am reading such diverse poems here today. Poets hearts are bleeding out poetry. That is where the best poetry comes from. It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Kristen. Continue to write and share it and I will be back to read it. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 13, 2011 at 9:08 AM Beautiful depiction of the photo Kristen and very expressive lines from this creative write.. good luck in John's contest luv..

Francine Roberts April 12, 2011 at 6:53 PM lovely, best of luck in the contest