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Natures Photographer

Nature’s Photographer
Heaven’s water-tanks roll loud on each cloud At beats of drum pounding each lonely heart Rain heavily bursts in great rhythms, so proud Wind sways abruptly with billowing skirt Cloudburst’s grand orchestra plays at dark sky Thirsty trees raise arms at marvelous sight Birds in dense leaves watch, no attempt to fly Plants---in toast of glassy-leaves with delight Earth soaks itself with nature’s greatest drink While beasts and critters are all wondering Bright light from clouds flashes at times in winks Capturing nature’s concert with drinking Lightning is nature’s star photographer Paparazzo of nature’s caregiver
July 24,2022 3.41pm https://www.howmanysyllables.com/syllable_counter/ and PS syllables counter 10-10-10-10/10-10-10-10/10-10-10-10/10-10 98 words 140 syllables 661 characters Theme: Nature 3. Quatorzain, abab, cdcd etc etc x1 for 14 lines, 10 syllable lines, Quatorzian is similair to a Sonnet It's All About Three Q's Contest Judged: 7/31/2022 5:13:00 PM Sponsored by: Constance La France Place 3 (up to 3rd multi-w)

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Date: 8/5/2022 7:08:00 AM
Len, congratulations on your win in my contest with your nice nature Quatorzain, blessings ~ Constance
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/5/2022 7:15:00 AM
Thanks for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear friend, Constance. Your approval through my win means a lot to me. So grateful to you for the inspiration too. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 8/2/2022 12:47:00 PM
Len, you have captured the essence of a rainstorm with your most creative images and put them into a permanent poetic frame to enjoy over and over my friend! Love your adventurous imagery! Congratulations dear friend! Time to go find the umbrella! Blessings!
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/28/2022 10:15:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed my imagery my dear friend Sam. Sorry for the late expression of gratitude here because I have overlooked your comment. Thank you so much as well for your congratulatory comments on my win. God bless you always. Hugs
Date: 8/1/2022 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write. Love your great ending. Today, be blessed with your win...........
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/2/2022 12:23:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend Paula for your congratulatory greetings and your constant loving support on my writing. May God bless you always with your writing too. Hugs
Date: 7/31/2022 10:49:00 PM
Beautiful description of the first cloud burst and the changes it has brought on the thirsting earth and the plants ! While reading your poem I felt the delight of watching a colorful firework in the night sky ! Congratulations Len!
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/2/2022 12:21:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend Valsa for your visit, uplifting words and congratulatory greetings. God bless you always. Hugs
Date: 7/28/2022 12:14:00 PM
Your words fill nature with a keen vigorous drama. Good luck Len. Robert
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Len Gasun
Date: 7/31/2022 6:05:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend Robert for your uplifting words and best wishes. God bless you always. Hugs
Date: 7/26/2022 2:45:00 PM
Excellent imagery and descriptions, Len. I really enjoyed your entry for this contest. Good luck my friend. Bill
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Len Gasun
Date: 7/31/2022 6:05:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend Bill for your uplifting words and best wishes. God bless you always. Hugs

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