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Nature's Masterpiece - a Collaboration

7/18/17 Acknowledgement: My thanks and appreciation to Heidi for sharing her poetic voice with me. As always, it was a pleasure working with you Heidi. Nature’s masterpiece is divinely spun She paints the sunset at a glance Her brushstrokes at dawn are second to none Across the landscape the colors dance She paints the sunset at a glance With a serenity that transforms my soul Across the landscape the colors dance As pastel skies sweep across the knoll With serenity that transforms my soul I wait for the stars as her palette gleams As pastel skies sweep across the knoll I’ve been given a second chance to dream I wait for the stars as her pallet gleams Her brushstrokes at dawn are second to none I’ve been given a second chance to dream Nature’s masterpiece is divinely spun --- 7/18/17 Do- It (Duets) Poetry Contest Sponsor: James Edward Lee Sr.

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Date: 10/1/2017 9:35:00 PM
A beautiful,smooth and lovely Pantoum Joseph and Heidi filled with lovely lines and imagery. A great collaboration. Enjoyed! :)
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Joseph May
Date: 3/23/2023 6:23:00 AM
Thank you Susan, glad you liked it
Date: 7/21/2017 5:10:00 AM
A lovely poem, great collaboration, Joseph and Heidi:)
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Joseph May
Date: 7/26/2017 6:30:00 PM
Thank you Jo
Date: 7/19/2017 7:40:00 AM
A beautiful pantoum, Joseph and Heidi. I'm all in on a second chance to dream:)
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Joseph May
Date: 7/26/2017 6:30:00 PM
Thank you Daniel
Date: 7/18/2017 1:32:00 PM
Such a seamless and beautiful collab.
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Joseph May
Date: 7/18/2017 2:08:00 PM
Thank you Tim
Date: 7/18/2017 12:54:00 PM
This is a masterful art, I truly like it a lot. I know this form is difficult for me but you two have mastered perfectly. Beautiful :)
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Joseph May
Date: 7/18/2017 2:08:00 PM
Thank you Akkina
Date: 7/18/2017 11:02:00 AM
what a glorious pantoum Jospeh I can see you and Heidi share a love of nature and it is very evident in the way you write together:-) hugs Jan xx
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Joseph May
Date: 7/18/2017 11:31:00 AM
Thank you Jan...hugs
Date: 7/18/2017 10:38:00 AM
I appreciate the acknowledgement Joseph. It was a pleasure working with you too :)
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Joseph May
Date: 7/18/2017 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Heidi, lovely working with you.

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