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Nature's Gift

No need, the vanity of life No need the silly, foolish quest ’Tis not a contest or a feat To contemplate which one is best For beauty lives within the mind And so its shape or hue may change It’s value is no more, no less For one it’s real, for one it’s strange The color of the world we know The gentle grace of its delight That beckons us to touch the love Grows lovelier with every sight To celebrate with nature’s gift With every gaze that I suppose Would never choose between the two Between the Cardinal and the Rose

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Date: 1/17/2023 2:04:00 PM
What a delightful poem expanding on beauty all around us. And, you are right, we don't have to chose which is more beautiful. Nice take on the theme. So creative. Congratulations on your win! Blessings of beauty to you.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/18/2023 8:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Sam!!
Date: 1/16/2023 4:35:00 PM
A very unique take on the contest theme Mike, nicely done.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/17/2023 4:01:00 AM
Thank you so much John!!
Date: 1/16/2023 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Nature's Gift" is a wonderful write and ending. Yes, how could one pick just one??? I love them both. (The Cardinal and the Rose.) Enjoy your win with blessings...............
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/17/2023 4:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula xxoo
Date: 1/4/2023 5:59:00 PM
Beautiful lovely poignant words from the heart that flow like a welcoming stream ! You have a gift Mike ! So very happy to read this today . Best wishes in the contest ! Onward to an amazing year 2023 !! Hugs , Susan :) x
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/4/2023 6:19:00 PM
Susan, thank you for your very kind words xxoo
Date: 1/4/2023 8:00:00 AM
Mike, Wow! This will be a winner. God luck and Happy New Year~ Warren
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/4/2023 9:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Warren!!
Date: 1/3/2023 3:50:00 PM
More elegant, elevating words, Mike. They seem to flow effortlessly across my screen as I search my heart for what they mean. Thanks, gw
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/3/2023 7:04:00 PM
I’m flattered that would read! Thanks GW!!
Date: 1/3/2023 3:02:00 PM
This is so gorgeous Mike. I have not been able to peruse many of my favorite poets in the past month at best, and I am reading yours today. I am left again breathless at your beautiful pen! I just read it to my daughter :) What a joy to read this, it's so lovely. I put your Poet's Prayer poem into my faves already, and now, this too :) <3
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/3/2023 7:05:00 PM
That is so nice of you, thank you again!!!
Date: 1/3/2023 5:47:00 AM
So true Mike beauty lies within us, we only have to open our hearts and minds to it. Hope your new year is off to a good start. Tom.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/3/2023 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Tom, the same to you!
Date: 1/3/2023 5:30:00 AM
Mike another beauty! Love this one…..Debx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/3/2023 8:35:00 AM
Thanks so much Deb xxoo

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