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Nature's Concerto

Harmonious tones, Reverberate the forest, From chattering leaves.

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/9/2009 12:48:00 PM

You know, Raul, I never thought of leaves as "chattering" until now. Now I'm inspired to go outside and have a conversation with them as the wind whips through the forest. Amazing image, Raul! Love, Carolyn

Anna Mayall

Date: 4/7/2009 11:10:00 AM

liked the poem

Danielle Moreno

Date: 4/1/2009 6:16:00 PM

Beautiful tones they make. DM

Abe Lopez

Date: 3/31/2009 5:33:00 PM

I've sat out among nature for many hours. while hunting and fishing and the sounds are music to my ears!

Josh Torres

Date: 3/30/2009 2:19:00 AM

great work dude >>>>>>>>josh

Steve Edmonds

Date: 3/29/2009 9:51:00 AM

Love the chattering leaves. You bring lovely scenes in the haikus.

Chris Goombi

Date: 3/28/2009 11:37:00 PM

A nice concerto is is, I can hear it now, nicely described.

Tyler Martin

Date: 3/28/2009 11:20:00 PM

Lovely scene painted in words. Tyler

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 3/28/2009 2:03:00 AM

'...chattering' so aptly describes the sound of the leaves... a fine HAIKU my friend! Best wishes, Keith

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 3/27/2009 10:14:00 PM

I can't begin to tell you how awesome this is and oh so creative...I can picture this so clearly...My yard used to be covered with leaves and when the wind blew they were so noisy and all over the place, I guess I was so tired of raking them up that I never thought of it as music but more as a nuisance..LOL... Now all my trees are bare....but when the leaves start to grow and fall, I will listen for those Harmonious tones..."chattering leaves- Stunning image here. Beautiful as always..GB Tyesha

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 3/27/2009 9:58:00 PM

Nice Concerto Raul a true music concert. Lovely write. Love Elizabeth

Daniel Neal

Date: 3/27/2009 8:37:00 PM

Wow, you can tackle a difficult piece, very complex them come and do a sublte haiku. You're bad, this one is going to my fav's. DN

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 3/27/2009 5:20:00 PM

I want some leaves... bunches of them this year!!!! so many I cannot rake them all this fall!!!! really nice write!!!!! :) best regards, Lucinda

John Weber

Date: 3/27/2009 1:23:00 PM

Nice use of auditory cues, Raul, with the title's theme being expressed perfectly! Warm regards, John.

P Sheart

Date: 3/27/2009 12:35:00 PM

Very clever and witty! I love how in three lines you capture the magic of nature. One can truly here the music if one listen with an open heart. Take care hun. Love Light Truth Patricia

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/27/2009 12:25:00 PM

Beautiful concert, Raul! Your images are awesome in this, Raul! So much beauty to find in the world around us and you find so much to share in your wonderful poetry! Love, Robin

Jim Wilson

Date: 3/27/2009 12:01:00 PM

Wonderful Paul, you really communicated that particular sensation. Thanks, Jim.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/27/2009 11:58:00 AM

so true! love it Raul! Jim