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Nature's Concerto

Harmonious tones,
Reverberate the forest,
From chattering leaves.

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Carolyn Devonshire

April 9, 2009 at 12:48 PM

You know, Raul, I never thought of leaves as "chattering" until now. Now I'm inspired to go outside and have a conversation with them as the wind whips through the forest. Amazing image, Raul! Love, Carolyn

Anna Mayall

April 7, 2009 at 11:10 AM

liked the poem

Danielle Moreno

April 1, 2009 at 6:16 PM

Beautiful tones they make. DM

Abe Lopez

March 31, 2009 at 5:33 PM

I've sat out among nature for many hours. while hunting and fishing and the sounds are music to my ears!

Josh Torres

March 30, 2009 at 2:19 AM

great work dude >>>>>>>>josh

Steve Edmonds

March 29, 2009 at 9:51 AM

Love the chattering leaves. You bring lovely scenes in the haikus.

Chris Goombi

March 28, 2009 at 11:37 PM

A nice concerto is is, I can hear it now, nicely described.

Tyler Martin

March 28, 2009 at 11:20 PM

Lovely scene painted in words. Tyler

Keith Bickerstaffe

March 28, 2009 at 2:03 AM

'...chattering' so aptly describes the sound of the leaves... a fine HAIKU my friend! Best wishes, Keith

Tyesha Ehigiator

March 27, 2009 at 10:14 PM

I can't begin to tell you how awesome this is and oh so creative...I can picture this so clearly...My yard used to be covered with leaves and when the wind blew they were so noisy and all over the place, I guess I was so tired of raking them up that I never thought of it as music but more as a nuisance..LOL... Now all my trees are bare....but when the leaves start to grow and fall, I will listen for those Harmonious tones..."chattering leaves- Stunning image here. Beautiful as always..GB Tyesha

Elizabeth Neal

March 27, 2009 at 9:58 PM

Nice Concerto Raul a true music concert. Lovely write. Love Elizabeth

Daniel Neal

March 27, 2009 at 8:37 PM

Wow, you can tackle a difficult piece, very complex them come and do a sublte haiku. You're bad, this one is going to my fav's. DN

Lucinda Bulger

March 27, 2009 at 5:20 PM

I want some leaves... bunches of them this year!!!! so many I cannot rake them all this fall!!!! really nice write!!!!! :) best regards, Lucinda

John Weber

March 27, 2009 at 1:23 PM

Nice use of auditory cues, Raul, with the title's theme being expressed perfectly! Warm regards, John.

P Sheart

March 27, 2009 at 12:35 PM

Very clever and witty! I love how in three lines you capture the magic of nature. One can truly here the music if one listen with an open heart. Take care hun. Love Light Truth Patricia

Robin L. Gass

March 27, 2009 at 12:25 PM

Beautiful concert, Raul! Your images are awesome in this, Raul! So much beauty to find in the world around us and you find so much to share in your wonderful poetry! Love, Robin