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Nature's Call

Cool soft saint Augustine under bare feet, fresh earth scent wafting through the breeze; Gardenia's sweet fragrant bloom with buzzing bee in pursuit. Hammock swaying under the shade tree, beckoning me to just be, with Thee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/25/2009 2:32:00 PM
Idylic poem Doris. The slow sway in a Hammocks glee, as the bee zzzzzz,z under a summery greened tree, awesome images here, just lovely>>James
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Date: 8/24/2009 4:31:00 PM
Simply lovely, Doris!! What a tranquil feel to this wonderful poem! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 8/24/2009 11:16:00 AM
Nicely written. The title had me going in a different direction. I like the line "Hammock swaying under the shade tree, beckoning me to just be, with Thee". Mom
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Date: 8/24/2009 9:56:00 AM
Beautiful writing Doris. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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