Nature's Call

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Rookie Italian racer Stu Gotti Wicked fast in his bright red Ferrari With one mile to go Gotti got real slow- Mad dash to the nearest Porta Potti September 12, 2020 EoW Theme Series (this week) Sport Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/28/2019 11:38:00 PM

This is grin-worthy for sure, Mark!

Mark Toney
Date: 6/29/2019 9:19:00 PM

Thanks, Michelle! Let’s hope he made it in time :) ~Mark

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 6/27/2019 9:02:00 PM

G'day Mark … nature beats anything that we humans throw against it - thank you Mark - Lindsay

Mark Toney
Date: 6/27/2019 9:34:00 PM

That is very true, Lindsay. Thank you for stopping by. ~Mark

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/27/2019 6:43:00 PM

Wonderful rhyme there, my friend -- Gotti and Porta Potti. Excellent combo. Gave me a good chuckle; exactly what limericks should do. Thanks! :) gw

Mark Toney
Date: 6/27/2019 7:20:00 PM

I appreciate that, Gershon. I’m glad you liked it! ~Mark