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Nature's Art

Dawn dips its brush in golden hues Setting sun paints tangerines Waves ride the sea in all their blues Dawn dips its brush in golden hues Nature's artwork, with beauty spews A masterpiece of lovely scenes Dawn dips its brush in golden hues Setting sun paints tangerines 4-3-19 Writing Challenge 1- April, 2019 - Its All About 8 - Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Smita Kulkarni

Date: 6/14/2019 10:20:00 AM

Simply beautiful! -Smita

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/25/2019 6:52:00 AM

I have read your creative winning work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara

Constance La France

Date: 4/23/2019 11:12:00 AM

Joseph, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely triolet, I love nature too !

Joseph May
Date: 4/23/2019 7:45:00 PM

Thank you for my placement DH

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/21/2019 8:48:00 PM

Beautiful in every way. Congratulations Joseph, on this win. :) Brandy

Alkas Poetry

Date: 4/17/2019 4:04:00 AM

Fine metaphor you created here in your poem my friend...This is also my way of doing poetry. Wonderful painting ! Cheers ! alkas.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 4/11/2019 7:24:00 AM

'Setting sun paints tangerines' What a great line. An excellent description of a new day dawning.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/10/2019 7:54:00 PM

Dawn is quite a painter; vibrant and full of Spring colors. I'd hang it on my wall.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/7/2019 11:28:00 AM

Good luck in the contest Joseph - this poem looks like a win to me. Nature described at its best! Poetry hugs, Jennifer

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/6/2019 12:49:00 PM

wow, resplendent painting of nature in all its glory, joseph... huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2019 8:05:00 PM

Perfecto, mi amigo!

Joseph May
Date: 4/4/2019 11:16:00 PM

Gracias Andrea, I know this is one of your favorite forms

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/4/2019 4:54:00 PM

This one has great rhythm, flow and rhyme. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I appreciate you dropping by with congrats. This reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara

Joseph May
Date: 4/4/2019 11:15:00 PM

Thank you Sara..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/3/2019 7:12:00 PM

such a beguiling read which highlights the grandeur of morning, joseph... thumbs up!...huggs

Joseph May
Date: 4/4/2019 11:12:00 PM

Thank you Nette

Robertina B.

Date: 4/3/2019 6:44:00 PM

A magical piece of art you created, Joseph.. Glorious!! A fave for me.. Have a blessed day!

Joseph May
Date: 4/4/2019 11:12:00 PM

Thank you Robertina

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/3/2019 6:09:00 PM

A superb nature painting..I liked the tone of the poem..especially the repeating lines..well written, Joseph.

Joseph May
Date: 4/4/2019 11:11:00 PM

Thank you Vijay

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/3/2019 3:35:00 PM

A lovely dawn...It has a certain magic to it...

Joseph May
Date: 4/4/2019 11:11:00 PM

Thank you Arturo

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/3/2019 2:55:00 PM

You are the artist!! As you have painted such a beautiful image with your words. The "Setting sun paints tangerines" Yes, yes it does. :) My heart is smiling. ~ Brandy

Joseph May
Date: 4/3/2019 2:57:00 PM

Thank you Brandy

Jan Allison

Date: 4/3/2019 2:24:00 PM

I'm not a great triotlet fan but the imagery in this is super, just replying to a few messages thought I;d drop by:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May
Date: 4/3/2019 2:55:00 PM

Thank you Jan, hope all is well..hugs