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Nature's Agony

Perhaps since earth elements first became aware of being created for mankind’s ignorant gain, all mortal suffering has saturated the air with more than Mother Nature can successfully shake. Maybe behaviors from tornados to earthquakes are her only defense against being drained. The earth may absorb too much agony to bare for no human breaks that earth is not fully there. Unable to manage each heart-shattering stain, earth cannot serenely contain all our despair so her atmosphere saturates until it breaks. Calamity might be nature’s sobbing-release, her agony gulping and gasping suffering, raging until exhaustion restores her to peace. Rather than earth elements teaching us balance, we may have created earth’s contentment-challenge.
... CayCay Jennings February 10, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/25/2018 1:43:00 AM
Very creative and well done. I like the way you express you're self in all poems. Have you read Rev. 11;18? "God will destroy those destroying the earth". Imagine the agony God feels seeing man's selfish greedy acts that harm his creative masterpiece. We'd want to act to preserve what we made, wouldn't we? Mind provoking write, well done! bbn
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Date: 2/16/2018 9:13:00 PM
A compelling, creative and intriguing poem CayCay. Such beautiful and meaningful imagery brings Earth's emotional turmoil to life.. I'm not surprised that humans are causing Mother Nature to lose her mind! Your depiction is elegant and your last line is an exquisite exclamation point on an enthralling write. Warmest wishes and hugs my dear friend. ~Susan
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Date: 2/15/2018 7:41:00 PM
This one really emotes the agony of the earth, Caycay. I liked it very much.
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Date: 2/11/2018 5:45:00 AM
Wow!mesmerizing! Love it!
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