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Nature's Abundant Gifts

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Anything Good Contest Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton 10/6/23

Most mornings I can be found in my backyard, checking milkweed leaves I protectively guard. I collect them to nourish and nurture til the day butterflies emerge, dry their wings, and fly away. I smile at the sight of dewdrops on green leaves that sates great thirst for which all flora grieves. Above mountain crests, clouds are aureate gold, reflections of sunlight, as I watch morning unfold. The dawning of a new day is Nature's sworn duty. She takes her work seriously, resulting in beauty evident to anyone who enjoys songbirds trilling or who find sunrise pastel-colored skies thrilling. I inhale the scent of the ocean's crisp salty air, and revel in the breeze tussling through my hair. In moments when I walk along a sandy beach, Nature exposes herself as if within my reach. I find solace on walks. I'm in nature's tranquil grace. At peace with myself when I accept her embrace. Humbled when standing beneath a forest's canopy and all I contemplate is writing a poetic rhapsody. I appreciate nature much more when I'm by myself, never disturbing its harmony, as I move with stealth. I listen to leaves rustling, walking in drizzling showers, never tire of seeing bees sip pollen from wildflowers. I hold just as dear, the time between day and night when the sun slips into the horizon, hour of twilight. That's when cicada call and lightning bugs take wing. Gifts from nature's hand would make the Muses sing.

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Valsa George

Date: 10/7/2023 9:49:00 PM

A lovely Nature poem on the many faceted marvels of Nature. Lin, I enjoyed reading this poem on this sunny and cool morning especially the one stanza- "I inhale the scent of the ocean's crisp salty air, and revel in the breeze tussling through my hair. In moments when I walk along a sandy beach, Nature exposes herself as if within my reach." I can so well relate as I too love being on a beach.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/7/2023 9:19:00 AM

Lin, there aren't enough words to describe your magnificent masterpiece. Not only is the rhyme scheme excellent, but your imagery is heartfelt and pleasant to read about your love of nature. Congratulations on winning the contest.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/7/2023 5:00:00 AM

Well done on placing 3rd Lin lovely poem about nature hugs Shadow

Lin Lane
Date: 10/7/2023 7:25:00 AM

Thanks ever so much for the honor, Shadow. It's wonderful to see you on site again.

Bill Baker

Date: 10/6/2023 10:04:00 PM

A FAV, for this delicate expose on the beauty and blessings of nature while experiencing it alone in the early dawn or at sunset. Your imagery was heartfelt and was comforting to read of feeling you have for nature and solitude. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your poetry, Lin. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Lin Lane
Date: 10/7/2023 7:25:00 AM

Thank you never seems adequate for all of the time you spend reading and commenting on my poetry, Bill. Hugs.

Jeff Connelly

Date: 10/6/2023 2:33:00 PM

A nice "poetic rhapsody" you've written Lin. Thanks

Lin Lane
Date: 10/7/2023 7:24:00 AM

Thanks a bunch, Jeff.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/6/2023 1:08:00 PM

I'm in awe, Lin, with your fabulous creation. Not only is the rhyme scheme effective, but so are the images you paint with your words. I, too, love nature. Like you, I prefer walking in it alone undisturbed. I agree, "the dawning of a new day is nature's duty.' I consider the new day as my own special gift when I'm out alone relishing it. Anyway, you have a true gift and a beautiful voice. Keep writing, Sara

Lin Lane
Date: 10/7/2023 7:24:00 AM

We have many things in common, Sara. I'm a huge fan of poetry and admire how everything you post is created as if you've been there, seen that, or felt what your words convey. Those are the things that make a writer a poet, even more so if they come from that poet's imagination.

Jay Narain

Date: 10/6/2023 10:38:00 AM

Nice poem on love with nature.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/7/2023 7:22:00 AM

Thank you for the many kind comments you have for my poetry, Jay.