Nature Will Go On No Matter What It Will Evolve

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Immortal land awakes through dusk and dawn Beneath ceiling spun sugar and midnight blue. Wind's breath trill of tiny song accrues through ardent woodlands, rivers, and natures gentle fawns. Tears of life stream with allure and glamor Dreams grow draping over nature's life in each Branches newly bereft of leaves, tips reach Gilded sunrise bonding souls and laughter Ocean's emotion echoes deep shifting realm Its grace untouchable in its deepest depth As it attains its greatest heavens breadth ancient secrets adhered on coral helm 3/15/2017

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Carole Duet

Date: 7/10/2018 12:34:00 PM

Congrats, Eve, on this oh so lovely poem.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/9/2018 12:41:00 PM

Beautiful imagery projected through words and aided by the accompanying gif. Nature is such a vast source of inspiration! ~ Congratulations on placing first, Eve. Hugs // paul

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/7/2018 8:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Well-written rhyme and rhythm. Enjoyed this.

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/7/2018 7:26:00 AM

Lovely, Eve. Congrats on your top win.

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/10/2017 10:22:00 PM

Lovely imagery of nature's beauty that you've painted here in your fine poem, Eve! Congrats on your win :)

Darren White

Date: 4/10/2017 2:06:00 PM

Eve, I am awed, how wonderful.... And that picture is so great with the poem too. Congratulations.

Eve Roper
Date: 4/10/2017 8:56:00 PM

Thank you, Darren, congratulations to you as well for a great poem:-)

Lu Loo

Date: 4/10/2017 7:58:00 AM

perfect rhythm and rhyme! Loved this one Eve- you are so gifted with your lovely pen! congrats and thank you :)-luloo

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/18/2017 12:17:00 AM

I absolutely love your poem! The read is fluid and, oh, so lovely. I also love the pic, the water moves!, and that captivated me, I didn't know pics could do that. All in all, this was a most enjoyable visit to your page. All the best ... CayCay