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Nature Under the Sun's Eyes

Gracious sun-lit falls reveal nature’s peaceful calls like polished opals. Keen river currents in periodic movement, like soap detergent lead gravity’s fists. Pathways hidden in steamed-mist. Treasure found at tryst. Now beauty, I gaze Through the subtle sparkling phase, Let leaves, shed their rays.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/11/2011 8:40:00 AM
Nice imagery here Orlando!Congrats on your win!--kashinath
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Date: 3/10/2011 4:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 3/10/2011 1:20:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku sequence, Orlando. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 3/10/2011 10:42:00 AM
Such a pleasure to see you Orlando near the top with this worthy Sixth place Victory. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:43:00 AM
I love your description of the falls and the river below it. Well done, Orlando. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 3/10/2011 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in my contest Orlando. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:41:00 PM
Congrats Orlando on your success in Carol's contest with this expressive entry luv.. enjoy your top ten victory...
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:31:00 PM
Congratulations on the sixthy place win in the contest of carol, Orlando
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:15:00 PM
Some nice images in this one, Orlanda. Loved the polished opals! congrats!
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Date: 3/2/2011 4:10:00 PM
powerful yet peaceful, great poem :)
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Date: 3/2/2011 3:21:00 PM
Nice string of haiku with continuity of the theme, Orlando
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Date: 3/1/2011 11:50:00 PM
VERy nice, Orlando. It covers much of nature!
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