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Nature To Its Fullest (My Opinion of Nature)

Nature to its fullest Is where all beauty lies For flowers bloom and animals dance. and I'm sure no one would say other wise. I am one with nature I will not lie I hunt with the wolves And sing with the birds I dwell the dark forests Where beauty is seen A beam of light across the bright blooming narcissus flowers Next to a large pond with silver fish gleaming in the water. To this I ponder at what I see.. Why cant this be shared amongst us all? My wonder is over when spot a panther in ivory black Only to turn silver upon the moons brilliant light Gleaming eyes turned towards me as i am doing the same A single tint of sorrow in her eyes For I see that she has but one cub, innocently playing with his mothers tail For then I suspect that she lost all but one of her litter, This is love of an animal with her cubs a loss that seems unbearable Thus i think of every day society and am disgusted by those who kill their own Just because of regret, how they put them in places to be left to die, to think about how Painful it would be for an infant to die of starvation and thirst, a baby crying for love but Unable to find it. then it dies, and the mother seems not to care... it sickens me to say how This can be done. But to most, i should add, morn for their baby's death, And some cherish the arrival like peace on earth. Why can't society become one? Why must we endure such heartaches? So many questions but not many answers, But some should be left untold. Mothers and fathers alike cherish birth like nothing better could happen. Even as life gets harder, love is still the strongest emotion. This is a poem of my opinion. I hope to hear what your opinion is.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/18/2009 11:45:00 AM
Thaaannk You...On The Panthers Parrrt...I Will Writee More Monday. When I Have A Computer Again... Id Lovee To Hearr Morre.
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Date: 11/5/2008 9:12:00 AM
Hello Jacob.... there is real promise and talent here. Some advice if wanted... if not tell me to get stuffed... ok ( please remember this is just my view ) try to shorten your lines and find single words that describe: All your emotion is there but you need to "Hone" it as your poetry gets lost in your words. Try editing this one and taking it down to the bare bones of its message; pick the points and create your feeling, not your words in the reader....
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Date: 11/5/2008 9:11:00 AM
Hello Jacob, I have tried to post a comment several times now, but for some reason it will not go.... perhaps another day.... thank you for your comment.
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