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Nature Mis-Behaves

Thunder growls in the distance herald storms; Dark clouds sneaking across sky They’re up to no good.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/3/2018 3:35:00 AM

- Forecasts are bad - The weather is incredible at this time of year, M.L - A great kimo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/3/2018 4:18:00 AM

It's decent here this week; some showers but, not deluge like the past couple of weeks. Thanks so much.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/2/2018 6:29:00 PM

That last whimsical line made me smile inside, M L. Beautiful imagery in this Kimo poem. Ty for giving us a full poetic measure of thoughtful brevity. Wonderful poetry. Love and smiles always.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/3/2018 4:19:00 AM

Thanks again, Freddie; I'm glad it made you smile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/2/2018 3:09:00 PM

I like how you pictured it in the kimo form.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/3/2018 4:20:00 AM

Thanks Andrea. I write whatever form I'm feeling within. Sometimes they work out just great.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/2/2018 3:04:00 PM

i can't count the many storms going on in all countries these days... greeat poem, M L.. huggs

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/3/2018 4:21:00 AM

Yes, there seem to be a lot, lately. I use them to write poetry...providing that my house isn't blowing away. Thanks so much.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/2/2018 10:52:00 AM

nature has a mind of her own, that's how disasters are sewn, oh, but it contains a gentle hand too. Thank God for that. Nice poem dear M.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/3/2018 4:22:00 AM

Yes, I agree; Mother Nature has her good and bad days, too. Thanks for stopping by.

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/2/2018 7:24:00 AM

Love it, ML.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/3/2018 4:22:00 AM

Thank you, Line.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/2/2018 7:02:00 AM

I love personification, this is wonderfully written!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/3/2018 4:22:00 AM

Ooh, thank you.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/2/2018 5:20:00 AM

Ominous Kimo brilliantly written dear , MLK!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/3/2018 4:22:00 AM

Many thanks.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/2/2018 1:09:00 AM

I just enjoyed this, lovely!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/3/2018 4:23:00 AM

I'm glad, Arthur and thank you.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/1/2018 9:45:00 PM

I love your personalization M.L. I am always talking to the weather. : )

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/1/2018 10:01:00 PM

Thank you Connie.