John Freeman Poet Haiku

Nature Arisen

~soft mountain blankets
     goose down  like flakes, winter store
        potential life thrust 

~El Nino awake
     a weather serpent slither
       energized frolic

~white mountain blankets
      cascade floods of winter store 
         aroused mud demon 

For and in honor of Carol Brown
And Contest: Nature Comes to Life

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Audrey Haick March 3, 2011 at 2:20 PM Beautiful Haiku deserving of your fine win, John! Congratulations! Love, Annalise

Kash Poet March 1, 2011 at 6:32 AM Congratulations john on your well deserved win in the contest with this wonderful Haiku.Thanks for your ever inspiring words at my pages---kashinath

Andrea Dietrich February 28, 2011 at 8:46 PM Congratulations, john, it's lovely to see this in the winners' circle.

Francine Roberts February 28, 2011 at 8:23 PM wonderful haikus John, congrats on your win in the contest

Robert Pettit February 28, 2011 at 7:55 PM Three well written haiku entries for Carol's contest. Carol should like them.

Sara Kendrick February 28, 2011 at 5:46 PM Congratulations ..Sara

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet February 28, 2011 at 2:54 PM Oh John this was fabulous and a well deserved 2nd.place win.Congrats to you and thanks for your congrats to me.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Dr.Ram Mehta February 28, 2011 at 1:05 PM Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of carol, john

Carol Fillmore February 28, 2011 at 12:21 PM A very cool creative write John! Congrats on your win, well deserved:) Thanks for the congrats for Renewal...my first 1st place:) Carol

Sharon Ruebel February 28, 2011 at 10:32 AM Hello John, Congratulations on your win in the contest, this is just beautiful As Always, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 28, 2011 at 7:22 AM Congrats Moses on your second place win in Carol's contest with this elegant entry my friend.. full of great imagery and warm lines.. enjoy anothere sweet success with luv..

Tahera Mannan February 28, 2011 at 7:06 AM I knew this would fare very well. Many congratulations for this win.

Carol Sunshine Brown February 28, 2011 at 6:14 AM Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest John. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick February 27, 2011 at 7:55 AM I thought that I had read and commented on this one already...Great descriptive work..Reads like winning material to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for your faithfulness in commenting on my humble work..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire February 27, 2011 at 7:39 AM When El Nino awakens, nature certainly does come to life, my friend. You have painted quite amazing images in your entry for Carol's contest and I wish you success. I am out of town until Wednesday, but wanted to say hi. Love you and your poetry, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2011 at 12:23 AM john, I enjoyed this series of snow/water haiku. Goose down is always such a cool image for snow. I like how you took this from mountain snow all the way down to those mud demons!

James Fraser February 26, 2011 at 8:38 AM Scenic Haiku John. Good luck in Carol's fine contest with this gem. Have a lovely weekend....:)

Deb Radke February 25, 2011 at 7:10 PM This is extremely good. Your final line, in each haiku, is tremendously faithful to form, as well as wonderfully and descriptively written. Best wishes in the contest. Deb

Kash Poet February 25, 2011 at 7:01 PM Excellent Haiku john!Agreat entry into the contest---kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 25, 2011 at 2:17 PM Awesome entry Moses.. u have captured new essences in each verse and stanza of your Haiku .. good luck in the contest my friend and appreciate your sweet comments too...luv..

George Aul February 25, 2011 at 8:46 AM Good write for the contest........George

Elaine George February 25, 2011 at 8:46 AM Sensational Hiku, dear John. Lainie

Constance La France February 25, 2011 at 5:05 AM " awesome and marvelous" haiku, best of luck in the contest~~

Andrea Dietrich February 24, 2011 at 11:33 PM wow, john, one of your best haiku. Really bringing nature to life!

Nette Onclaud February 24, 2011 at 10:10 PM how rich the images are, john! success to you in the contest..:) huggs, nette

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