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Nature Arisen

~soft mountain blankets goose down like flakes, winter store potential life thrust ~El Nino awake a weather serpent slither energized frolic ~white mountain blankets cascade floods of winter store aroused mud demon For and in honor of Carol Brown And Contest: Nature Comes to Life

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Audrey Haick

Date: 3/3/2011 2:20:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku deserving of your fine win, John! Congratulations! Love, Annalise

Kash Poet

Date: 3/1/2011 6:32:00 AM

Congratulations john on your well deserved win in the contest with this wonderful Haiku.Thanks for your ever inspiring words at my pages---kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2011 8:46:00 PM

Congratulations, john, it's lovely to see this in the winners' circle.

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/28/2011 8:23:00 PM

wonderful haikus John, congrats on your win in the contest

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/28/2011 7:55:00 PM

Three well written haiku entries for Carol's contest. Carol should like them.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/28/2011 5:46:00 PM

Congratulations ..Sara

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 2/28/2011 2:54:00 PM

Oh John this was fabulous and a well deserved 2nd.place win.Congrats to you and thanks for your congrats to me.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/28/2011 1:05:00 PM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of carol, john

Carol Fillmore

Date: 2/28/2011 12:21:00 PM

A very cool creative write John! Congrats on your win, well deserved:) Thanks for the congrats for Renewal...my first 1st place:) Carol

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/28/2011 10:32:00 AM

Hello John, Congratulations on your win in the contest, this is just beautiful As Always, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2011 7:22:00 AM

Congrats Moses on your second place win in Carol's contest with this elegant entry my friend.. full of great imagery and warm lines.. enjoy anothere sweet success with luv..

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/28/2011 7:06:00 AM

I knew this would fare very well. Many congratulations for this win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2011 6:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest John. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2011 7:55:00 AM

I thought that I had read and commented on this one already...Great descriptive work..Reads like winning material to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for your faithfulness in commenting on my humble work..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/27/2011 7:39:00 AM

When El Nino awakens, nature certainly does come to life, my friend. You have painted quite amazing images in your entry for Carol's contest and I wish you success. I am out of town until Wednesday, but wanted to say hi. Love you and your poetry, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2011 12:23:00 AM

john, I enjoyed this series of snow/water haiku. Goose down is always such a cool image for snow. I like how you took this from mountain snow all the way down to those mud demons!

James Fraser

Date: 2/26/2011 8:38:00 AM

Scenic Haiku John. Good luck in Carol's fine contest with this gem. Have a lovely weekend....:)

Deb Radke

Date: 2/25/2011 7:10:00 PM

This is extremely good. Your final line, in each haiku, is tremendously faithful to form, as well as wonderfully and descriptively written. Best wishes in the contest. Deb

Kash Poet

Date: 2/25/2011 7:01:00 PM

Excellent Haiku john!Agreat entry into the contest---kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/25/2011 2:17:00 PM

Awesome entry Moses.. u have captured new essences in each verse and stanza of your Haiku .. good luck in the contest my friend and appreciate your sweet comments too...luv..

George Aul

Date: 2/25/2011 8:46:00 AM

Good write for the contest........George