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Nature Prepares for Winter

Leaves have fallen down
Making colorful bed
Children hide and seek
Parents came with rake
Took the leafs away

Trees stand gawky 
Bare to the bones
No leaf for dress
Not intended

Season new
Welcome change
Birdies flew

From nest 
Empty

cold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/14/2012 9:38:00 PM
The visual appeal is great.
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Date: 11/27/2010 10:24:00 PM
Common thought, but your pen has made it exceptional and sweet,Wellington
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Date: 11/27/2010 9:18:00 PM
Very atmospheric!
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Date: 11/27/2010 8:16:00 PM
This form is wonderful and u have utilized it so very well Joy with this brilliant piece on Nature and Winter .. enjoyed those birdies flying ..luv.. thankxx for your lovely comment on my poetry tonight .. enjoy a happy weekend with luv..
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Date: 11/27/2010 7:10:00 PM
the grace of God? now i know. don't let me brag about it. thankyou very much. i love you. john
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Date: 11/25/2010 9:55:00 AM
Hi Joy, I'm sorry you had an experience with an alcoholic such as the one I described. It leaves you wondering how they truly feel. Have a wonderful week! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/25/2010 9:38:00 AM
Nature is preparing for winter, and there is such beauty in that change, even in that gawky are tree, I enjoyed reading your poem very much~~
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Date: 11/25/2010 7:55:00 AM
thankxx Joy for your lovely comment.. enjoy a H.T. day luv with your luved ones..
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Date: 11/24/2010 4:28:00 PM
Happy thanksgiving day. Joy
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Date: 11/21/2010 11:47:00 AM
You captured the beauty of the changing of the seasons Joy.. Awesome write.. Hope your weekend is a good one, love Wilma
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Date: 11/19/2010 8:38:00 PM
Very expressive Joy .. a treasure with vivid visuals and wonderful descriptive lines luv.. enjoyed tonight ..happy weekend with luv..
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Date: 11/18/2010 7:32:00 AM
tis the season. john
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Date: 11/16/2010 10:08:00 PM
well it sure is about that time, I love the cold lol, enjoyed your write tonight,..p.d.
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Date: 11/16/2010 6:53:00 PM
Wow! What a wonderful, creative write, Joy. And I agree with what Dr. Ram said below. Winter finds creatures taking refuge indoors. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/16/2010 3:53:00 PM
Nature is prepared for the winter,the nests are empty, but the houses are full. Joy
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Date: 11/16/2010 1:50:00 PM
Nice work on natures way of introducing us to winter. Thanks for sharing.
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