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Flowers of snow float from high, Breaking that summer heat drought. Each floral flake falling from a beautiful glory, Enveloping the ground all about The slopes, peaks and troughs, the valleys of green, Covered with love from the sky, Leaving animals, birds and trees in a placid pure peace, And hidden by a clear dust of why In this beautiful now, nature hears with an ear, A sensitive quiet ear to restore, All that’s been in every season leading till now, All that’s been there before This beautiful clean purge of the life in the hills, The natural ebb with a flow, Purifies all that nature can be, Perfecting itself with some snow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/2/2017 5:35:00 AM
Hi Lewis , wow this is so beautiful , snow is the most wonderful blanket to wake up to :))))hugs
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Date: 7/2/2017 5:29:00 PM
Thanks Niall, snow is amazing, I love it. Cheers
Date: 6/29/2017 11:27:00 AM
A lovely illustration of a first snow of the season !!
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Date: 6/29/2017 8:07:00 PM
Ebb and flow of seasons I think is beautiful, thanks Lenna
Date: 6/29/2017 11:05:00 AM
Wonderful imagery here, Lewis. The thought of snow in this heat wave is a nice change:)
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Date: 6/29/2017 8:06:00 PM
I love the snow , thanks Daniel
Date: 6/29/2017 4:22:00 AM
a descriptive gem of a poem Lewis! Such wonderful imagery and the flow is so so beautiful:-) adding this to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/29/2017 8:03:00 PM
Thank u Jan. Glad u like this one, cheers
Date: 6/29/2017 1:59:00 AM
Lovely poem Lewis, enjoyed the picture you created in the readers mind. Glad I came across this! Regards, Craig
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Date: 6/29/2017 8:02:00 PM
Thank u OME, glad u enjoyed this