Native Culture

“Apple pie without cheese, is like a kiss without the squeeze”
It is of the traditional Wensleydale cheese made with the milk of a Ewe
Franciscan monks used to keep the little cheese making sheep
They used a culture called rennet to make the finest cheese of mouldy blue  

Wensleydale cheese, the palette does please with a taste fresh and light
You’re not likely to find the blue Wensleydale, cos now they only make white
A piece of fruit cake with cheese or an apple, or maybe Christmas cake too
This amazing bacteria culture with milk, what a taste treat is waiting for you. 
© 07/01/2013 ~GG~

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Don't shout at me Debbie just my bit of fun for your contest.
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February 22, 2013 at 5:50 PM
a fun poem,I like what I read, ~SKAT
A   Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 8:51 AM
Mandy, , :-) Congratulations in Debbie's fine " EIGHT Lines any KIND " contest. enjoy your day... PD
Gorelick Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 9:24 PM
Enjoyed your cheesy write..I love cheese and fruitcake..not sure Ive ever had them together. congrats on this delightful winner. BG
Horsman Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 2:59 PM
congrats on your placement...You'll never guess what your captcha is WARP
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 4:39 PM
thanks harry just need a weft now lol xx
Guzzi Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 2:01 PM
Ah Goldie how could anyone get cross at you? such a clever woman! Congrad's Light & Love
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 4:40 PM
Thanks Debbie, oh cool one xx
May Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 10:31 AM
congrats on your win Mandy
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 4:40 PM
Thanks Joseph xx
Ryerson Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 8:27 AM
You just made my stomach growl, Mandy...the only cheese I've ever had on Apple pie is plain old American...Congratulations! - Tim (LOVE that first line quote too)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 4:41 PM
try some other cheese Tim youll love them xx
Nair Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 6:40 AM
Congrats, Mandy, like it!! Jag
Williams Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 6:11 AM
Mandy congrats on your win, cracking cheese....David
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 1:51 AM
Definately your own Cheezeman's Twist on the contest. Congratulations.
Roberts Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 8:06 PM
I love cheese and an apple. Yummy..... Great poem congrats......Seren
Horsman Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 6:05 AM
believe it or not Mandy,, there is a story behind Wensleydale cheese, deemed illegal by the powers to be.... love your poem....Soup
Harrell Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 11:16 PM
Sounds very yummy. Hungry already! I love cheese -all kinds of them. But never did have an apple pie with cheese though. Love it, Mandy :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 6:29 PM
hey what a great play on words using the word culture!! this is certainly unique and I can't help but think Debs will really like it!
Fisher Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 6:03 PM
I agree, awesome first line, and what a way to put it all together. Boy am I Hungry now.
Bauer Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 3:20 PM
i like your play on words and learned something, too! i never tried apple pie with cheese (i'll take ice cream on mine!) but i love the expression you began this poem with.
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