Nate

There once was a man named Nate Not usually known for being late But he drank too much egg nog Ended up in a fog And never showed up for his date Heidi Sands 12/8/17

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Roy Pett

Date: 12/11/2017 6:34:00 AM

Great Limerick Heidi, hope mr Nate is now in a better state, well written enjoyed. :))

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/11/2017 6:35:00 AM

Thank you Roy. lol. Yes, let's hope he's in a better state now. :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/10/2017 1:02:00 PM

That foggy dizzy feeling after eggnog...that for once and he will show up next time for sure, for a date with a ravishing young blond.One pointer he should not rake up sad stories this winter at least for this awesome limerick.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2017 1:09:00 PM

lol. Thank you Rajat :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/9/2017 9:36:00 AM

Ha, ha ... very funny, Heidi. This limerick made me smile ear to ear. Still laughing, lol! I drink only non-alcoholic egg nog. Guess I'm won't wind up in a fog. Hilarious poem though. Love and smiles always.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/9/2017 9:38:00 AM

Thanks Freddie. I am glad it could make you smile and laugh! :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/8/2017 4:08:00 PM

Oh that Nog, you gotta be careful. fun one Heidi...

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/8/2017 4:09:00 PM

LOL That's right Charlie. Thank you :)

Constance La France

Date: 12/8/2017 3:54:00 PM

Heidi, a great limerick, I am not good at these so I sure do appreciate those who are !

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/8/2017 4:06:00 PM

Thank you. I just started to try them and I do not feel that I can do them very well lol. Thank you for your comment :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/8/2017 12:51:00 PM

Hello Heidi, being stood up for a date.... That happened to me along time ago. have a nice day my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/8/2017 1:02:00 PM

Well it looks like Nate caused it to happen in this one ...lol. Sorry to hear it happened to you long ago. I also hope you have a nice day Darlene :) Thank you