Narwhals

The humble narwhal Unicorn of the ocean Dwelling in the sea The humble narwhal Hunting delicious tuna Eating all the fish The humble narwhal Bearer of the forehead tusk Stabbing enemies The humble narwhal No, they aren't a type of fish But they are mammals

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Skat A

Date: 4/29/2015 5:12:00 PM

RYAN, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2015 3:54:00 PM

I Love this because I am a unicorn fanatic... Ryan, at times I think all the uncirns jumped into the sea to hide from the world as Narwhals :) , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Madisyn Jackson

Date: 4/27/2015 1:22:00 PM

Oh boy a Unicorn in the sea so fun!

Madisyn Jackson

Date: 4/27/2015 1:21:00 PM

Okay then