Narcissus

Let those failed lights keep their starry darks, no hidden treasures have they – gems who hoard their sparks, as bushel a-cap heaven’s dearest light, blessed with angel appearance and nature now in free mirror fall kingdom sovereign pool of self worships self-love, that’s all --

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/24/2025 8:25:00 PM

I like that line 'free mirror fall.' Kudos. Gershon

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/25/2025 6:29:00 PM

Yep. No good to get hung up on images, especially self. Destined to fall. Thank you, Gershon.

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/23/2025 9:50:00 AM

Its a blackout indeed in some areas Joe Dimino.'

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/23/2025 12:43:00 PM

Hi Joe; appreciate the read and comment. Strange, often what I think is my better poetry, gets fewer comments. Go figure? Maybe I just don't know good poetry. I notice that with other poets I follow...often what I think is great poetry, only gets a few comments.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/22/2025 12:53:00 PM

Let those failed lights keep their starry darks… now in free mirror fall…A fave…interesting!

Joe Maverick
Date: 3/23/2025 9:52:00 AM

And heres looking at'cha Kid..I mean Kim..Lol))) I Coldent help that with name similies n all.)

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/22/2025 5:48:00 PM

Thank you, Kim; you made my day!