Narcissus

Echo, you dizzy tramp,
I’m searching for my soul.
Echo, I won’t white picket fence my heart

Inside your Jackie bag with brown rusty nails;
I’m searching for my soul.
The mirror princedom of train windows kidnaps me;

I’m a white hermetic monstrosity
The earth bleeds every spring;
I steal the souls of peacocks with my camera --

O the awful love-pain of water reflections,
O the terrible grace I’m courting --
Confucius, go away.

God's Heathcliff gaze finally meets
The white apophyllite eye of my tetragonal suns;
A thousand full moons exfoliate me like a leaf.

Grow my paperwhites in water rather than soil;
Put me next to a bright window before I’m gone.
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Ashley Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 7:38 AM
Dear Diana, the anguish your soulful imagery is captivating. I was especially struck by "O the awful love-pain of water reflections" and "A thousand full moons exfoliate me like a leaf". Your creative pen shines. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Rolland Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 5:24 AM
beautiful poetry, narcissus drowned in his reflect, very interesting poem for mythology and so on, thanks poet
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