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Narcissus

Echo, you dizzy tramp, I’m searching for my soul; Echo, I won’t white picket fence my heart Inside your Jackie bag with brown rusty nails, I’m searching for my soul, Mirror images from the train windows kidnap me, I’m a white hermetic monstrosity The earth bleeds every spring, I steal the souls of things with my camera; O the awful love-pain of water reflections, O the terrible grace I’m courting, Confucius, go away; My Heathcliff gaze finally meets The white apophyllite eye of my tetragonal soul; A thousand full moons exfoliate me like a leaf; Grow my paperwhites in water rather than soil, Put me next to a bright window before I’m gone.

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Date: 1/11/2025 7:38:00 AM
Dear Diana, the anguish your soulful imagery is captivating. I was especially struck by "O the awful love-pain of water reflections" and "A thousand full moons exfoliate me like a leaf". Your creative pen shines. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/11/2025 7:00:00 AM
A dizzy tramp? Why not. Hey this is a rather interesting take on the myth. Feels modern. Urban
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Date: 1/11/2025 5:24:00 AM
beautiful poetry, narcissus drowned in his reflect, very interesting poem for mythology and so on, thanks poet
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