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Narcissus

"Wow! He's handsome", Narcissus would think as he gazed at himself from the brink Then he'd lean in to stare at the lovely lad there and that's how he'd wind up in the drink!

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Date: 8/23/2024 6:46:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/24/2024 2:16:00 AM
Thank you, Beata!
Date: 8/19/2024 6:31:00 AM
Great! Congrats! Xo
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/24/2024 2:17:00 AM
Thank you, Crystol!
Date: 8/18/2024 2:32:00 PM
That's a really good Limerick, Lycia, regarding content, flow and meter. ~ Congratulations on your fine win. // paul
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/24/2024 2:18:00 AM
Thank you, Paul. I am known far and wide across the land as the Queen of All Limericks
Date: 8/18/2024 11:34:00 AM
lol good one Lycia, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/18/2024 1:32:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! Sincerely, The Queen of All Limericks
Date: 8/6/2024 2:52:00 PM
Skoal!
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