Narcissus


"Wow! He's handsome", Narcissus would think
as he gazed at himself from the brink

Then he'd lean in to stare
at the lovely lad there

and that's how he'd wind up in the drink!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Agustin Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 6:46 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
Harding Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 2:16 AM
Thank you, Beata!
Woods Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 6:31 AM
Great! Congrats! Xo
Harding Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 2:17 AM
Thank you, Crystol!
Callus Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 2:32 PM
That's a really good Limerick, Lycia, regarding content, flow and meter. ~ Congratulations on your fine win. // paul
Harding Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 2:18 AM
Thank you, Paul. I am known far and wide across the land as the Queen of All Limericks
Allison Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 11:34 AM
lol good one Lycia, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Harding Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 1:32 PM
Thank you, Jan! Sincerely, The Queen of All Limericks
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