Nancy - Black Fire

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Nancy turned to look my way,
Early morning, one spring day.
Her black eyes bright
Like a new moon's light,
She caught me unaware.

I looked in wonder back at her
As melancholy filled the air.
For a rising sun would part us,
With our hope of love left bare...
                                       
Unfettered  years had passed us by,
When we met beneath a summer sky.
Wrapped in the arms of a weeping tree,
And a few precious moments left to be,
We lived the passion of that lost dream.  

As flames consumed the veil of years
And warm caresses stripped our fears,
Below that new moon's pitch black light,
With just this one single precious night,                            
Our hearts, for now, were free.         

Again in chilly autumn
I passed her on the street.
Far beyond the hopes of any dream -
I saw her look, her sideways glance,
I saw black fire and the trance 
That thrilled so long ago…

Living is a mystery
As cold winter nights grow long.
With just melancholy memories,
And an old, unfinished song.

written 2016.11.12

entered in CONTEST 258 any form, any topic max of 36 lines -Brian Strand	2/4/2017 - placed 3rd

Let the Pens Flow - Narrative Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/18/2020 12:19:00 AM
Your story faded before the beauty of the line.. Lovely poem.. Great win Francis..
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 2/18/2020 6:51:00 AM
Thank you, Jenish for placing me among this group of truly fine poets. ...Fran
Date: 1/5/2017 10:47:00 PM
Profound is the word to describe this poem. Congratulations on your win, Francis.
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Date: 1/5/2017 8:08:00 PM
Congrats o your win, Francis. Beautiful poem; you capture the melancholy very well.
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Date: 1/5/2017 7:48:00 PM
A 7 for your beautiful, WINNING poem, Francis! Janice
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Date: 11/21/2016 6:50:00 AM
Delightful poem to read tonight! Thanks for sharing. This one is incredible from beginning to end. (: -JWE
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 11/22/2016 8:43:00 AM
Thank you, JWE. ...Fran
Date: 11/17/2016 7:36:00 PM
wow, what a poem about lost passion. Melancholy and memories is all that can be left!! Beautiful writing.
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Date: 11/15/2016 5:35:00 AM
Ahhhhh! What a beautiful story you have conveyed with these poetic words, my friend. Laine
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Date: 11/14/2016 11:06:00 AM
with languid expressions, you rise, francis... so sensitively quilled!..huggs
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Date: 11/13/2016 12:44:00 PM
Beautiful soft memories in lovely artistry. Well done Fran...
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 11/13/2016 9:54:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie.
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